Lyra is an antisocial, impatient unicorn who dislikes rain, walking, and characters she deems annoying. Unfortunately for her, she will have to deal with all three of those things if she wants to make it back safely to her house.
Hi. I'm a young teenager with Asperger Syndrome, so I may misunderstand you at times, please don't take it personally. :)
Lyra is an antisocial, impatient unicorn who dislikes rain, walking, and characters she deems annoying. Unfortunately for her, she will have to deal with all three of those things if she wants to make it back safely to her house.
As a fellow teen with Asperger's, I would say: Cute story! Also is it just me, or the way she was written, might have a case of Asperger's herself....maybe???
I haven't started reading it yet, but I know it's going to be great. You're a great writer.
5974458 Aw, thanks! c:
5974028 Perhaps, that's funny you'd say that because I was writing her character out as someone that acted a lot like I did when I was younger (and had not yet been diagnosed by any of my doctors to have Asperger's) so I actually wouldn't be surprised if she did have Asperger's.
Thank you, and thanks for your feedback too c:
5974458 he's right you should have way more followers. :)
5975652 Thank you so much, that means a lot actually
Loved this This should have more views
Now that's a good shipping.
5979198 Aw, thanks c:
YES! Looks like someone read my comment!
5980525 LOL, you are heard
That was a good short romance story. Wishing it was longer at least 4 chapters or more.
5991195 Thanks! Maybe I will make a sequel sometime.
Well you got to remember the rain can be very unexpected sometimes
I got to say this was a pretty nice short story and once again nice to see one of the most underrated character noteworthy and the shipping between those two with Lyra so it looks like they were about to be finished until the storm finally hit and she was pretty annoyed but then noteworthy decided they should just walk and even offer her to her home I decide to really don't want to be in a storm she really don't want to be stuck in the building either so they decided to go out there but somehow despite everything this time to bond with each other even play around in the rain after she finally reach home noteworthy ask her if he wants to walk again which she accepted but then offering him to stay here until the storm stops which that was pretty sweet of her to do that again very nice short story keep up the good work