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Dinky Doo the unicorn and her best friend Rumble the pegasus are inseparable. Many are jealous of the strong bond they hold, while others are of course expecting them to get together pretty soon. Dinky, however, is quick to assure everyone that their relationship is strictly platonic, but can a series of school events change that about her?
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Love can be blinding, Rumble.
@Ultrabots8-- Unfortunately I think we all know how it feels.
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Oh, poor Rumble!
Rumble's dream was so sweet! I hope it works out for him somehow.
5756420 You'll have to stick around to find out ;)
Thanks for reading and for your comment!
5756371 Love stinks sometimes..
God, what a chapter
5786936 Eeyup.
Most of us can wait for new chapters, take all the time you like if you want
5808279 Alright, thanks c:
Aw. Poor Rumble
. thrown out.
5812084
Great chapter, the events of this was unexpected. Like when I read Pip threatening Rumble, usually he's nice
5858449 Thank you c:
We don't know a whole lot about Pipsqueak's character as he is a background colt, which means I'm hoping it's safe to give him the kind of personality where he acts nice on the outside but is mean on the inside. Also, these events take place in their teenage years, well into high school, so Pipsqueak could have had a complete personality flip.
Thanks very much for your feedback!
OMG, my heart burns. I thought I'd ne notified if there was a new chapter on this story and until the new one came out it didn't know this one was out. The first part just pulled some of my heartstrings and the last part, I was all like: "aaaaaaaaawwwwww."
This does seem to draw resemblance to a part of my second book. I wonder if I had anything to do with that, but really: aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww..."
Wow, the emotions in this are REAL. I'm actually a bit jealous good job. I'm about ready to cry.
Well played. Well played.
5910547 Thank you friend
I'm glad it pulled at your heartstrings
5910614 Heheh, thank you.
And thank you for the favorite :D
5910614 Just wanted to clarify, not really jealous, just thought you fic was better than anything I produce.
5930209 I know what you meant
That said, thank you, though I'm sure that's not true
Nice chapter. You never cease to keep this story scream with romantic comfort. Good job. I really enjoyed it.
5970498 Thank you c:
"Cutie Mark Crusaders, a group of teens devoted to helping other teens get their cutie marks. Rumble didn't know anyone in their class who didn't have one yet, and the last he'd heard they just kept calling themselves that even after they got their cutie marks, but that was a story for another day."
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm.
"You stay away from Dinky, do you hear me?" *My reaction to pip*- "First off, who the hell do you think you are, her father? And secondly, NO!!!"
"If I see you less than ten feet away from her I swear I'll tear your wings off." *Also my reaction* "Oh no! My only weakness, empty threats!!"
5976174 LOL, I felt that way writing the story
The romance was so good and there were sad parts too but this was really emotional story... The Story is good...
5991187 Thank you
Don't you sorry me, it was great, definitely worth the wait. Sorry it got deleted.
6056458 Thank you c:
But... what got deleted??
6056622 you did a blog post a while ago stating that you had to restart writing the chapter because it got deleted.
6056622 oh, sorry. I must have gotten you confused with someone else. Sorry about your depression. I can totally say I share your pain. If you want, I can write a chapter on you in my NDHTTYW like I did with Feline. I actually really like your work.
6056674 Oh, phew. I got scared for a minute there as I was worried some of my work got deleted. Aww, that's really sweet of you. You don't have to, but if you want to, you totally can :D
Thank you, and it's also really flattering to hear that you really like my work.
6057485 NP:twilight blush: you deserve it.
6057555
If you want, I can take requests, as to if you want me to draw or write something?
Personal Information Processer Squeak is going to say no, I can feel it.
(Sigh) *Grabs Pipsqeak's head* You have a moment to pray to whatever god you might have.
Alright, RainbowNightFury, can I call you RNF? Is okay if I put Pipsqueak in the middle of a human transmutation circle? And then burn his eyes and toungue out? Blame Roy Mustang, not me.
6074318 Yes.
Sure, you can call me RNF.
Did you mean Celestia? Or perhaps Luna?
I think this story needs the 'Alternate Universe' tag. There's just too many non-pony objects in it.
6102277 I think that "God" would refer to Celestia or Luna, or possibly it wouldn't have to mean anything. Such phrases might just exist in Equestria.
This does not take place in an Alternate Universe. So the show doesn't go out of their way to showcase these items. It doesn't mean they won't ever be invented in Equestria, as this takes place a few years in the future.
Anyway, I actually did come by that thought a couple of times when writing, but the subject of the matter regarding the phrase "God" and the items unseen in the live show would make a whole different story. These are simple minor details, and correct me if I'm wrong, but you might seem to be taking it a tad bit serious. No offense.
Excuse me if I sound rude. It wasn't my intention to come off as so at all.
I'm going to put more thought into what I write now.
6102352 I just thought that that 'God' line was a typo or something.
I forgot about that, my bad.
Don't let a halfway thought out comment from one person make you change your approach to a story. Write whatever you want to.
6106295 Alright, well thanks.
New chapter, YAY! I like how you put the emotions of missing the other person into the story without having to have them break up like a lot of other cliche stories. That's a nice touch.
6138361 Thank you c:
Well I should probably go to be-.. Hey new chapter, welp Looks like I'll be waking up at noon....again.
6139596 Haha, uh thanks.
I like the new cover art.
6165967 Ah thank you! c: