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PinkFire The Pony


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The CMC find a help wanted advertisement for a night guard at Freddy Fazbear's Pizza. They think it could be a great chance to finally get their cutie marks! As their much too young for the job, they decide they will go and help out the workers. They've promised to help, but can they when they've been trapped backstage by one of the mascots?

This is a crossover of MLP and FNAF. If you dislike either of those I suggest you walk away now. Although I doubt you dislike MLP or you wouldn't be on this website... Umm, where was I going with this? Let's just get to the story.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 25 )

i think sempai wants them to notice him

Your writing is good. I don't know why so many downvotes :rainbowhuh:

I once thought of a fanfic where the Hair 6 go to Freddy's and defeat Purple Guy with a friendship rainbow.

6020152 I think it's disliked so much because I'm not the most experienced at writing... While I have spent much of my time learning how to write properly, I've spent loads of my time reading and writing stories and over the course of a couple years I've gotton a bit better. But believe it or not I'm actually not even in Highschool yet, (I don't want to give out my real age though) and therefore I'm not extremely good at writing... Idk, that's just my guess. Enjoy my long and somewhat pointless response!

6020240 That's a great idea! I would love to read something like that!

6020316 or maybe they just realize how bad a writer I am :derpytongue2:

i like it and PinkFire The Pony please make more chapters for this story

6020411 thank you! And of course I'll make more chapters!

(And also, you can just call me PinkFire, PinkFire the pony sounds much too formal)

Comment posted by PinkFire The Pony deleted May 27th, 2015
Comment posted by PinkFire The Pony deleted May 27th, 2015

Guys, here's a question. Originally I was planning to make this story have quite a stupid and funny ending, not that serious. But seeing how you guys seem to like it, I was wondering if I should make it into a longer story. I'm going to leave it up to you. Do you want a funny ending? Or a more serious complicated story? I'm going to write more chapters very soon, if not today. So please answer quickly.

-PinkFire

6025910 thanks! Umm again. And also, a question. Would you like a more serious story? Or a short funny one? I can't decide.

6025984 i want this story to be a more serious story

6025940 i want this story to be a more serious complicated story with longer chapters

Aww snap!
Is Goldie gonna kill them?!?
Are the animatronics gonna save them?!?!
Is the Purple guy in golden Freddy?!?!
Will balloon boy stop being a c**t?!?
Probably not that last one....

6026313 thanks for giving your opinion :) I've given several days and only you have responded, so I'll probably just go with your answer. It seems that is what other people were wanting and expecting as well. Thank you!

6041283 your welcome and ok and your welcome again

6020341
I will read it later, but I will say that one reason that people down vote it, is because they think FNAF is overrated. But just don't listen to them, haters gonna hate you know?

Well, the only criticism I have is the pacing: it seems like everything is on fast-foreword. Besides that, I don't see why everyone hates this fic. Maybe it'll get more attention if you keep writing, now that the CMC are apparently cool again.

Well, I liked the CMC before they were cool, so thumbs up.

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