My player number 2

by Candy-Sweets_12

Chapter 3

"Hello Button." Sweetie smiled. She sat next to him on the blanket and stared at the sunset he was now facing.

"This is the hill where we first met." Sweetie gasped. Button smiled he loved to surprise Sweetie Belle.

'The look of excitement on her face the way her eyes seemed to sparkle, and how a little spark would come from her horn if he really surprised her.'

"Button you didn't have to do all this, time our date to the most beautiful sunset," She reached into the basket and pulled out a plate of cookies. "buy my favorite treats", she said as she said as she looked into the basket. She looked at the stars that were starting to come out. "take me star gazing on the most beautiful place in Equestria." Sweetie loved everything Button had done for her, but this was the most romantic to her, by a landslide. The fireflies were poking there heads out as Sweetie and Button engaged into a conversation. Button talking about his latest accomplishments, and the new promotion he's been awarded. Sweetie talked about how her singing career had taken her to several cities and towns. And how the tickets would always sell out within two days. But Sweetie mentioned how she always loves coming home in the end.

"I don't blame anypony for wanting to hear your voice." Button said. This made Sweetie blush.

They talked more and more until all of the treats were gone, and looked up to the sky. They looked at the little shapes. And Button was nervous as ever, hoping that Sweetie will notice it.

"What's that?" Sweetie started to notice some of the stars move and take shape, Until it formed a sentence.

Sweetie gasped with tears in her eyes, she looked at Button, who was at his knees now.

"Sweetie Belle, you've made me the happiest stallion in the whole world, you're voice is like it came from an angel's, you're sweeter than cotton candy, and you have amazing gaming skills. You've helped me realize my true self, and have been my first real and true friend. Will you give me the honor of marrying you?" Button said as he held out the ring. It was a gold band with a diamond that resembled the ones in minecraft.

Sweetie stood, her hoof over her mouth. Just when Button thought she would say no:

Yes! Yes! A million times yes! Sweetie said as she kissed Button square on the lips. Button was shocked, but happy. He was going to marry the most beautiful mare in the world.

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Sweetie and Button gathered their families and friends the next day. "Button and I have a special announcement," She looked at her fiancée.

"We're getting married!" They shouted.

Everyone gasped in glee. Stallions were giving Button a pat on the back, while mares and fillies were embracing Sweetie Belle with hugs.

"You're a lucky stallion." Sweetie's dad said as he nearly knocked a nervous Button over on his hooves.

"Thanks." Button said.

"Oh, I should start making the dresses, get the dress sizes of your bridesmaids, get you a beautiful dress for your dream wedding..." Rarity ranted on and on until stopped by Sweetie.

"I'd love to make you the dressmaker, but please don't go overboard." Sweetie said.

"Why of course. This is your wedding, you're the bride. Not me. Oh, my little sister is getting married," Rarity said with tears bubbling to the surface.

"Mommy? Are you ok? Aren't you happy for Aunt Sweetie Belle?" Rarity's youngest daughter said.

"Of course, mommy's just crying happy tears is all." Rarity said.

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"So everything is set huh?" Sweetie said. As she looked at Button after setting down the last box.

"Yep," Button said.

"I can't believe that the wedding is a month away." Sweetie said with a sigh.

"I'm happy that we'll be living together now." Button said as he stared at the house that took him and Sweetie Belle three months to buy.

"Anything for my player number one," Sweetie said.

"And anything for my player number two." Button said in reply.

Author's Note:

I'll do the wedding in another story, and I'll continue the gala thing, along with other side stories In the next one. Why? Because it would take too long to fit the details of the wedding in this story. So I'm DOING IT IN THE NEXT ONE. Don't like it?
*Puts on digital sunglasses.* Deal with it.
-Candy

Comments

[Candy-Sweets_12]

I know that it's short and corny but cut me some slack, this is my first story. What'd you expect? The best story ever? This wasn't meant to be perfect or read by a lot of perfect or get a lot of views like Bride of Discord, or My little Dashie. And my spelling isn't perfect, I know. Just wanted to get that out the way. Basically I'd appreciate it if anyone took the time to make a comment of any type (that's appropriate) or even take the time to read this fanfic since I was inspired to write this after Don't mine at night. The ponified version of course. Plus if took any ideas from anyone's story I apologize I didn't mean too. Any way, peace.

[socky_dude]

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I think it's adorable!
Also.... THIS IS YOUR FIRST STORY?
OH MY GOD..... GOOD JOB!!!
honestly you did really well for your first story!

[PhoenixBlaz3]

Have you released the next story yet? So goood!

[Candy-Sweets_12]

I'm working on the cover art for the next story now, and be on the look out for a story Called "The making of a nightmare" Where I write about the best princess(at least in my opinion) Luna and her first night on the moon, but it won't be on the front page of the site. But yes, whatever free time I have left I'm writing or drawing for this. I'm also thinking of making a Rumbaloo story, What do you think? And thanks for the support, it really brightens up my day.

-Candy

[Candy-Sweets_12]

Here's an announcement I will post the second story this coming weekend. Also please tell your friends about this, whether they like it or hate it, I need the views. So sit tight and be patient. Peace.

-Candy

p.s. My making of a night mare story is out, so go find it. Please.

[the frank]

I haven't read it yet, but I have a question about the title. Is it supposed to be "number"?

[Candy-Sweets_12]

Thanks for helping me realize that, I can't believe I didn't notice.

[Specter_Knight]

??? on chapter 3

[Betoran]

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Well... There are errors yes, that can be seen. The story? I love it, and deserves my like.

Now to help a little?

Remember, you need to put the " on place, when they begin to talk and when they finish talking. That is one of the predominant errors I have seen but all in all it is a good story.

"I've got a little time to spare, the young stallion said.

It must be

"I've got a little time to spare." The young stallion said.

There are many places where the " is missing at the end making me a little confuse and re-read the paragraph.

Another problem would be the

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You placed, you know? Sure they are nice but they consume too much space on Iphone and the like, oh and the people that are reading with bigger letters. Try using the bottom that says 'Add Horizontal Line' it is just at the left of the 'Add link' and 'Add images'. Many people dislikes when they aren't being used properly. Just remember to gave one or two spaces after using the option so the division could be seen.

There is the lack of , and . on some parts but that is really not that big of a problem for many tend to just ignore it-not everyone-

Welp that is all.

P.S. You should edit the story later, add more scenes or just correct little errors here and there..

P.S.S. Reading the sequel right about... NOW!

P.S.S.S. Being your first story it is awesome ma bro, you have my respects and likes xD. Just remember that in the future after you become a better writer to take a look on your first story and correct your errors.

P.S.S.S.S. I'm not forcing you to do anything, just criticism and giving you 'my' opinion. This is your story and as such you should do what you want on it. Have a nice day-wait didnt I said that already? uh... okay! bye bye!- Pancakes for Love!

[Candy-Sweets_12]

Thanks for the help! I really needed it.6468452

[jack the blu-jay]

"Anything for my player number one," Sweetie said.
"And anything for my player number two." Button said in reply.
Well almost none of the recent games have split screen not even halo 5

[Phoenix Nebula]

Great story!

[Candy-Sweets_12]

No denying that.7804507

[jack the blu-jay]

7804507 sweetie belle has no standards

[Candy-Sweets_12]

Welp, she's not a potato/Markiplier, or Diamond Tiara (that's what Mark looks like at least)

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[jack the blu-jay]

7805477 I can't think of a return joke so

[Depressed_Tea]

I love this ship. May it live forever.

Cuppa tea for you, dear writer.