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Sarah thinks her life is pretty boring and average, but one day, a startling turn of events could change her world forever. Can she overcome the new challenges that face her and still manage to survive high school? And what will her friends Alex and Chuck think?
This is an ongoing series, much like a TV show, so don't be daunted by the large amount of chapters! 
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Looking good so far. So, is it an OC only story? Or will more tags be added as time goes on?
Ok,Sage.....you kind of nailed me with Chuck, I would probably say that if one of my friends came to school as a magical, talking pony. Or something else awesome, like a wolf, cyborg, or zombie werewolf..
To be honest I expected this to be terrible but I was wrong
That was...a bit odd...Let's see where this goes.
Not bad so far. She never though to try using magic all this time? For shame.
I like this
But her parents not noticing her being a pony for a few days?
have a like anyway
Well... that escalated quickly. Went from "human goth girl" to "said girl's OC" in not even a minute. It's ok, though.
... because magic's that easy...
That guy... has issues. That's really one of the first things he thinks in the presence of a pony?
If pony anatomy is anything like real-life horse anatomy, the answer is a 100% NO!! Not to neglect the detail that the ponies of Equestria are from an entirely different universe altogether.
5951935 Well, keep in mind that this isn't just a pony, it's someone he already had feelings for. Also, even he questions why the hell he asked himself that.
5951860 They noticed, but they just aren't in the story right now. That's why she stayed home for three days.
5952075 Just doesn't seem like something anyone would think of right away...
... anyone same, at least. Seems like a "for later" kind of thought. One of those "after a few days/weeks" kind of thoughts.
5952134 Considering that our whole fandom is based on grown men who like candy-colored, talking ponies, does anything here need to apply to logic and reason?
5952140 No, I suppose not.
Why did she faint? If I had suddenly become my OC, I wouldn't be fainting. I would be jumping and screaming for joy.
Oh yeah, and I really like Sarah's OC design.
Now that's more like it.
5952459 A combination of the shock and her hyperventilating.
Hmm... It's not bad... Just a bit cliché
...i will be tracking I guess?
I plan to read it later today, but i have to say the chaters seems to be very short, maybe to short. Try to use 2,000 words, it seems every story i read is around that much.
5953935 And we meet again Texus
Pretty interesting chapter. I wonder, at the end of this series, shall she return to normality? Or shall Sarah stay a cute, tiny horse for the rest of her natural life? Only time will tell
I'm loving this, more please.
Like i thought to short, but nice even if it is rushed.
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I have to agree, but what makes it a bit bad for me is, that it is rushed, and rather short, this chapter could be even better if there would be written more, like the reaction of the other Humans too.
I think yu should make a long, and more or less detailed chapter about her, and her parents. I mean a flashback about how they react to it.
Okay i want o be honest, i really like how you write your very short, but interessting chapters, i can only not stop to ell you that it would be even better if you would make it longer.
I stop now with this story, not that it would be bad, but it is way to short to be somewhat special.
5965968 It's not done.
It's a good thing Sarah is a unicorn.
If she were a pegasus, she might be embarrassed by the "pomf" that accompanied her daydream.
5965987 Yeah but what i said was more meant for every chapter, and the whole story is maybe, and just maybe as long as the most one-shots.
I just think your chapters are ending to soon, and you could much more upvotes or likes if you would somehow describe a bit more.
I hardly see a story with less than 1000 words.
I'm liking this can't wait for more.
5952459 I would BE jumping and screaming for joy. you forgot the word be in there
5951912 RIGHT?!?!?
5967976 If one has patience, and proper focus, anything tat is hard, can become easy
poor guy...no waifu today
Now I picture Knight flying out of a portal, and ramming one of his hindhooves straight into Skimmy Jimmy's groin.
Like this
I'm still a little confused... how did Sarah become a pony, anyway? Was Celestia involved? Tell me, Party Pop! I crave knowledge!
6000073 I'm getting there.
Yuck, that kind of "brony"
Ah yeah, you gotta watch out for dem creeps. Dem creeps be creepin. be sure to check your six, Sarah.
I was reminded of this song when reading this chapter. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=OO_74Rd9OVQ
6000427 Nice song.
hehehe another awkwark situation.
I would like to learn from just whom she got her mastery of magic...
... and you should aim for longer chapters.
"Newfound abilities were still new to her."
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