Melony is a young woman of poor circumstances. When she finds herself in a new world of opportunity and prosperity, she can barely contain her joy. Join her and her friends in a tail that will show just how good life can get when given a chance.
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Melony is a young woman of poor circumstances. When she finds herself in a new world of opportunity and prosperity, she can barely contain her joy. Join her and her friends in a tail that will show just how good life can get when given a chance.
Next chapter please!!! I can't wait to read what happens.
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Will prob have it ready by Monday or Tuesday.
Not bad keep it up
What the fuck
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What's wrong?
6211267 Nothing, this was just unexpected I guess. Although the fact that the cannons fired when she said fire was a bit odd.
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I'll end up explaining away the cannon thing later on, (as soon as I think of something lol). But I'm curious, what was so unexpected? If you don't mind me asking?
You had my curiosity. Now you have my attention. I shall track this.
Good story so far. Wish the chapters were longer though.
Hmm... not bad, pretty interesting to say the least. I'll follow along.
Moar?
starting to re wright ch.2 in order to make sense of the overall arching story.