Forgotten

by Mazamis

My Dog Has Cancer And I'm Rewriting This Story...

chapter title says it all, with the current story its going no where, and i know some of you may like this but meh, im making the story better and more awesome, the concept still remains the same but it starts out completely different and (hopefully) has a different feel to it. I'll give you the intro paragraph just for the 50 something of you fans who circulate my air to refresh me... (see what I did there)

Have you ever worn a mask that looks exactly like your face, but not quite all of it? When you wear this mask do you use it to make all others despise even the mention of your name? Then when all come to you to laugh and insult you for the mask you wear, enemies quit fighting. They become allies to bring misery upon their common enemy, and as time goes on, they bond, and become closer. They forget about their hatred for each other and direct it upon your mask. They become friends, fueled by your own misery and demise. You wear this mask to bring others closer and create bonds of friendship that will outlast time itself, at the cost of your own.

kinda sad huh... i might change it a bit but it gives you a feel for the first chapter... not "hey lets go outside, ok" if you know what I mean. anyways hope you all enjoy the rewrite thats happening, a lots changing so when you read this again try to look at it from a new perspective, not looking for the original story with different words... again though, it has the same characters and concept just slightly balanced and more like camping (in tents) hope you all didnt forget about me (actually I hope you did so when I re-write this it will be like BLAM where did this come from?) Still going to continue F.U.C.K.s and try to make this reader interactive and such, after all I like getting ideas from readers (lets me know what they like) Anyways I have some very important procrasterbation to do so yea...

Comments

[Mazamis]

MOTHER FUCKING FIRST

[Ambassador_Derpius]

Ok well your story your rules but will the humans know atleast a fraction of why they are in hiding? Kinda unbelievable that they would be hiding and the main population forgets the reason why.

[Mazamis]

1260172 eemaybe... lets just say they have been living underground so long some dont believe there is a surface world... of course our main character does because hes tired of living in a rat hole...

[CyberCommand]

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[CyberCommand]

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[Mazamis]

1260263 I love you bro... you crack me up

[Literature]

My friend's dog recently died from leg cancer. I know how you feel.

[KillerofStars]

My 1st dog died from cancer.... I know that feel.
However this is a favorite of mine so i'll wait for this rewrite with God level patience.

[MyLittleBurger]

Two of my dogs died from old age.....