(Okay, okay, I give up! I'll write a Friendship Games story! My Idea of a good intro song for the beginning credits: Set it Off Just 'cause.
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Taks place after the defeat of Midnight Twilight Sparkle. (Because I know that I can't write a REALLY epic battle seen.)
Princess Twilight Sparkle and her friends have offered friendship to Twilight's human counterpart. Upon contact of the two Twilights, the portal begins to act strange. Twilight soon understands that their only option to save their two worlds, was not one that would bring much joy. (Romance Tag is for ending FlashLight sequence) Edited By: Remmy4warlord
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Okay, hold the phone. Why does this have so many dislikes?!?!
I'll say, the grammar could use a little touching up, but overall this was a very nice story! Super sweet!
Nice job :)
A few misspelled words but it was sweet, cheered me up a bit
5925543 People either: criticize grammar very harshly, or are trolls.
5925582 It sucks when people do that.
5925588 Trust me, it's like what people do to my stories.
Unless, my stories are pretty bad... 
Not like dislikes are more than likes. But this, this good. 
5925603 Exactly!
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Thank you, I'm Glad all of you enjoyed it!
5925543 I don't think it was an especially bad story, but there's certainly a lot of room for improvement.
It contains copious spelling and grammatical errors. The word "and" is misspelt in the second paragraph. There is one spelling error that actually made me burst out laughing at a point in the story which is supposed to be poignant:
The word is composure, meaning a calmness of mind. A composer is a song writer. It's like she's had this touching moment with Flash, and then Daniel Ingram's self-insert OC (Ingram writes the songs for Equestria Girls) turns up and she closes her eyes and kisses him instead.
One punctuation error which is fairly pervasive can be illustrated by this quote:
This should be one sentence. Full stop becomes a comma; lower case for the "he".
Better yet, leave out as many saids as you can.
These are minor problems which could have been caught by having someone proof-read the story before publication.
More major problems include:
FlashLight — a lot of people hate that ship enough to torpedo it on sight. (Personally, given that this story splits them up permanently, I'm OK with that side of things.)
Burning — OK, so you don't go into details, but it seems a little gruesome.
Drawn out goodbye speeches — they're overdone. It just feels like you're trying to bludgeon the reader over the head with emotions. You need to hold back a bit, and be more subtle. Think ninja, not kick-boxer.
Anyway, I hope you don't feel like I'm ripping your story to shreds. There were a lot of things I liked about it too. I especially like that Sunny returns to Equestria with Twilight. (Because I personally think that Twilight x Sunset is such a magnificent ship that other ships are sunk by its mere presence.) But the question that had been asked was about why it had so many dislikes, and I think these are some possible reasons.
At first: This isn't that sad....
Ending while listening to the given song: No! Why???? Why is this world so cruel?
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Thanks for pointing out these problems. I fixed the grammar errors that you pointed out.
Of corse not! I'm always open to constructive criticism. Also, the good-bye speeches were...um...to help with pacing as well as my idea of Twilight and Sunset's goodbyes. Like I said, I can be a bit overdramatic at times. I'll see what I can do about the speeches, I don't think I'll delete them, I'll just maybe tone them down a notch....if I can. Once again, thanks for pointing out these things.
1. Tanks for the Memories reference.
2. FlashLight part.
Jesus celestia the feels!!!
So..*sob*... Cute!!!!
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Thank you! I glad you liked it!
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Yup!
They were all crying, I couldn't help it.
Hey, what can I say...other than, it was fun to write. But Man, for a short sequence, it packed a lot of feels.
AND DA FEELS
MAKE ME HAPPY!
Yappyjack,
That. Was. INCREDIBLE!!!
(Pinkie Pie, can you quit hijacking my account please??!!)
Sorry.
(So, after that interlude, I must say that this story was incredibly emotional. I just wish that there was an entire novel about the entirety of your idea for Friendship Games.
Also, I'm deliberately NOT jumping on the Friendship Games bandwagon; I'm still writing my EG 3: Twilight's Shadow.)
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Thank-you! I'm glad you like it!
And I am still waiting in great excitement for want happens in your story!!!
5962077 I'm glad that you hold my work in high esteem. I'll be looking for new stories from you, Yappyjack!
Why that flashlight. WHY. Otherwise, great fic, but will probably never happen.
I actually dislike flashlight. just because flash is just..a crap character, but i enjoyed this. it was sad and made me inda happy. and said a da'w.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! Aside from the Flashlight of corse, but still.
6081538 I did enjoy it, yes ^^ Honestly, i'd be fine with anything Flashlight related if Flash wasn't one of those 'mister perfect' guys in ALL high school movies. XD
6081558 Oh, I see! I can understand that.
6084948 its why I like pony Flash, beause he does have potential of something they haven't touched. x3
The last paragraph kinda gave me a Full Metal Alchemist (2003 adaptation) vibe.
Hey, I'll give you points for honesty. Cheesy name, but at least it's honest.
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The...fl-flash...light...part...w-was... so...
6776332 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Also, thank for the Fav!
The FlashLight part! DUDE I CRIED!