Daniel Blaze is a human who’s has lost the few people he had close to his heart and has experienced nothing but pain and suffering for years. But all changed when he was brought to a world ruled by anthro ponies, and other mythical creatures.
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Geez, that was brutal! Incredible work mate!
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Daniel should go and hang out with spike pip and will. Just chill with bros and have fun
jesus man well hopefully things will come to pass i hope. awesome new chapter man
BOOOM IN YOUR FACES BIIIIIIIITCHEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! but i hope all get better
and i hope in the future a chapter with Lyra she is part of the herd for God´s sake
I LOVE THISSSS
We always hurt the one's we love. intentional or not. I don't think Daniel will hold a grudge. But what they did hurt him to the core and that;s a place only a loved one can get too.
I don't know why but I feel like Daniel needs to have personality opposite sidekick who thinks like he does just to lighten the mood
THANK YOU, such sweet sweet justice, not only did our boy give a "we're through" speech but even Celestia tore the mane 6 down, LOVE IT.
All I can say is just, WOW!!! Awesome chapter and with it brings some many thoughts to my mind. I just can't wait to see if one plays out the way in my mind. Well I guess its back to the waiting game. Patience here we come.
6958157 I actually kind of hope he doesn't forgive them for a long time, because what they did to him was unforgivable in my opinion.
6957869 I agree.
As I have stated before, I honestly don't want to see Daniel forgive the mane 6 anytime soon. Even if he does forgive him, they don't deserve to be in a relationship with him because this is the 2nd time they've abandoned them they blew there 2nd chance
6958252 but dude come on. Daniel is like Jon. He has a heart of gold so maybe he can find a way to forgive them . And plus he cant avoid them forever. The mane 6 need him after all the adventures they've been through
Aw now that was the retribution I was hoping for. I like the Celestia bit. She at the very least ignored daniel from a distance and she was upfront about her confession. Although, would daniel have been so forgiving if he heard the conversation between her and Luna? He only ripped the man6 a new one cause he heard the bs. I might be nick picking on that but boy am I glad he took what each of them said and threw it back at them. Btw, did Celestia call them to Canterlot or did they read the paper. Great chapter man
Not what I had in mind but still good anyways, but I do hope that there will be an arch for the we are through phase where Daniel gets more mares that love him. But also having the mane6 feal the pain and suffering that Daniel had felt because of their actions you know nightmares, paranoia, lack of focus AND definitely in conflict whith there actions, like they were right and Daniel will see there point of view. (You know for the stubborn one aka dash,applejack,rarity,twilght.)
Please man don't stop this amazing story
this story only gets better
Im sure things between Daniel and the mane six will be patched up in time
Awesome chapter man. Keep'em coming!
KO awesome chapter, this is a sign that Shining Armor and Cadance back get to together, reforming bounds of love and Friendship, and finding out the truth. Hopefully with Elements of Harmony too.
Holy shitbiscuits! Brutal,savage and EPIIIIIC!! Like it!
6958394 try putting yourself in his place. This is the second time these girls have abandoned you and one of them was about to ask a goddess to "remove you" would you so easily forgive them? Like I said even if he does forgive them, they don't deserve to be in a relationship anymore
6959030 ok I get what you saying. Your right. But I would lik the mane 6 to change and to understand his situation currently. Light cannot exist without the dark so the princesses should explain or rather Daniel explain that he'll die if celestia even tries to remove the darkness
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6958157 I agree with you guys. I think the mane six got what they deserve. I personally think there should be a whole story arc where Daniel has nothing to do with them and he gets other mares for his herd before even thinking of forgiving them. The point is they would feel the shame and sadness of seeing him being happy without them.
I personally like Gambit Wild's idea of having them having nightmares and paranoia and regret over their actions. It should drive them to the brink of madness where their screaming "LOVE ME DANIEL! LOVE ME! I'M SORRY!".
I also think that their actions should have some affect on their reputations in ponyville for a while. An example is that Daniel is a hero in the eyes of everyone in ponyville and across equestria, after hearing what the mane six did, no pony in ponyville will want any thing to do with them. It should get so bad that not even Spike or Pipsqueak or the others will have anything to do with the mane six at all. The mane six would be treated like shit.
An example would be rarity running up to spike just to talk to him only for him to tell her to fuck off and go fuck herself. Saying "I don't associate with filthy little bitch ass backstabbing whores." and other things along those lines to her. You could have Spitfire join Daniel's herd and she hears what rainbow dash and the others did to him and her reaction could be:
"You'll never be a wonderbolt as long as I'm alive you fucking piece of shit!"
Also, you could make it so the elements of harmony won't work until Daniel forgives them... If he forgives them.
Ponyville turning against the mane six would make them feel how Daniel felt when they turned their backs on him.
But that's just my opinion.
But a piece of advice from one writer to another, a big mistake most fics make is having the main protagonist forgive them way too fast. They never work for it. If you decided to have Daniel forgive them, make sure they work for it, have it span at least 5 or more chapters. Show them keep trying to get his forgiveness and failing until they eventually earn it.
But that's just my opinion and advice, you don't have to take it if you don't want to. It's your story so do what ever makes you happy
Overall, excellent chapter as always!
6959099 they no longer saw Daniel as their friend. All they saw was the demon Twilight wanted Celestia to remove/kill Daniel
6959198 I SO hope all that happens
6959198 Your right, the mane six do not deserve forgiveness, maybe for a couple of chapters.
like seriously i feel like i want to punch every single one of them in there pretty little faces, as in Twilight, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack.
My reaction when Daniel confronted the Mane 6:
Wow didn't know that Daniel would go that far. Then again I would do the samething... But with a very cold death ton. HAHAHAHAHAHA
I hope all go well?
HOLY SHIT ON A BRICK. YOU KEPT YO MOTHERFUCKIN PROMISE. DAT SHIT WAS EPIC.
Also about Darkus.... That chapter was AWESOME! BLOOD!
6957869 Bros before backstabbing hoes!
6958830 FUCK THE MANE 6!
REMEBER THE CODE!
BRO'S BEFORE BACKSTABBING HOE'S!
6969672 what part do you not understand?
Sad Pinkie makes me sad... Please forgive Pinkie...
6960257 I felt the same thing
6965761 bros before how's unless the ant a bitch
Daniel in this chapter:
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How stupid are you?
He was not in control
Luna paid for her crimes
Aurora was lonely and did not know better
And the elements betrayed there aspects and their lessons of friendship
This was just like the zecora accident but worse
8109815 Why are there dislikes? Pretty good points made
Looks like Karma is a b***h for the main six.
I felt really bad for Daniel for how Twilight and the girls treated him. He had every right to be mad at them. Great story!
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FUCKIN SERIOUSLY
Waitwaitwait...
NOW! The shit has hit the fan.
if he gets all the princess then he one lucky sun of a bitch also twilight and the grils got what they deserved.
That's karma for ya.