Daniel Blaze is a human who’s has lost the few people he had close to his heart and has experienced nothing but pain and suffering for years. But all changed when he was brought to a world ruled by anthro ponies, and other mythical creatures.
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I did like this story but you cross the line with what im willing to read sorry wont be seeing me again that fact that you wrote that in detail disgusts the hell out of me I barley tolerated the last one but this im done with this story goodbye
I somewhat agree with clove, while yes it shows the progression of the darkness within him, the scene of applejacks rape as well as hearing about how daniel had been raped as a child by drunkards in an alleyway puts a bit of bad taste to the story in my honest opinion.
that was just too much
y say no more
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There is the Dark tag in this story, so it has to be expected. I would suggest you give the next few chapters a chance before deciding to quit reading. Shadicbro Brony is trying his hardest to make the story as mysterious and suspenseful as possible.
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If you haven't noticed, Daniel never mentioned a lot of his past in the previous chapters. Only stuff that is really important to him. The only time he mentions a dark memory is if something similar happens to others after him.
Besides, the chapter is fine with me. Loved the last 2 BGM as well.
6575417 Fair point. Like I said, just my personal opinion.
Damn... That dark charkra is nothing to scoff at.
*Looking furious without remorse* You can't take back what you have taken.
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I hope you don't make this whole rape incident is not a usual thing for all the mane six. I'll admit Applejack was caught off guard but I really don't want to de-strengthen the canon characters.
Ok I have to admit I saw the dark so I was expecting some dark scene but damn that was really emotional. Please I hope that Rape scene wasn't Applejack's first time. At least spare me that, but the story content was amazing and a dark scene like that needs a tramatic scene like that to activate any sort of dark chakra at that level. Great story and i look forward to the next one. Just hope it doesn't continue to the other mane 6. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.
Wow that was dark but, it wasn't the darkest I've ever seen or read. But this was a great chapter. Also people need to be aware if you see the dark tag you have to be prepared for the worst. If you can't handle a little Darkness then you shouldn't have started reading this story in the first place. Anyways can't wait for the next chapter.
love your story (Minus the raping) but I think you should of written that he was a witness to the drunks raping a girl and him trying to stop it but gets bet up and is forced to watch because of his weakness. I think it make more scents that way because to me it doesn't make much scents for them to just rape him, bet him close to death yes, but not rape(unless they were drunken gays or something). just thought I throw my two bits.
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Unfortunately buddy, from what Big mac said.... it was
0-0....... DAAAAAAANM dude that was dark, not as dark as cupcakes both the original and alternative ending were rainbow is the crazy one but danm dude
6576922 I'm glad your feeling better about what happened in your life. Always know that those who care for you will always be there for you no matter what. I'm glad I was able to help you bro.
So what happened to the fire dragon that's supposedly inside Daniel that gives him immense fire power, that sees everything Daniel sees, whose power could have easily broken him out of the bindings and kicked their asses.
6577301 If you never read chapter 25, Daniel can't receive help from Kasai. His hands and legs were bonded to the wall, preventing him from doing any hand seals. He needs to do hand seals to activate his justu abilities.
6577385 KO awesome chapter say are you gonna do a three way battle of Daniel vs Bright Steel vs Alex with the other authors cause that would be so BEYOND AWESOMENESS.
6577588 There maybe a possibility it might happen. You'll have to wait and see.
6577385 So is the power of darkness the only one that is usable without any form of handjutsu?
6577723 Yes.
wow man dark but awesome those bastards hell the deserve that
I don't like reliving my emotions from reading someone stories. But chapter 30 brought the Hate out of me. I did get sick from the description of the main character's past, to the point I lost my lunch. But this is a good read and story you got going on. Very Nice! Still hate Dark though
i love the dark daniel pic
6578080 Credit for the pic goes to Alejin. He's one hell of an artist in my book.
6578087 random question but will you give daniel the 8 gates formation like lee or something like that?
6578100 I'm not sure. I never thought about that.
6578129 if you do, i can't wait for it
I enjoy your story but Daniel is becoming a problem for me.
The more I read, the more it fells like he :
- has been through every pain in the world,
- is the most powerfull entity in existence (or will be),
- can master technics in moments where anybody else need should decades of training
- is way too young for the power he have but there is no drawbacks whatsoever
- have no physical limits for his power (in the sense that he is like a battery with no capacity limit), honestly with how young his body is and how new his powers are, shouldn't he have problem using them ? Even keeping them in line (like, power flow or surges) ?
Like I said, I still enjoy the story, but it's quikly becoming a sore point.
Those assholes got what they deserve
Almost thought you forgot Darkus. Also rape....really? Why did you have to do that man!?!?! I mean seriously virginity loss to rape?!?!?! What. The. Fuck. Were you thinking!?!?!
Merciful Emperor!
Ok only complaint so far, Aj just got violated yet still had sex with Daniel afterwards. That type of thing is scaring and would take a good long while to overcome, good story otherwise big fan of it so far
7441709 Wouldn't you want to get that horrible "thing" out of your head and make true love to the one you feel is the one.......... I know i did.
Dude AJ actually getting penetrated is fucked up Daniel should go darkus before that happens and rip the dudes dick off you know like he fucking promised to if the guy messed with AJ again...
"Use your aggressive feelings Daniel, let the hate flow through you".
Not enough let them BURN IN HELL AND THEM RELIVING THEIR WORST NIGHTMARE OVER AND OVER
hmmmm, everytime i read Darkus’s lines i see it as deathwing from the WoW expansion “Catalystem” talking, everybody else? Or at least he’d be a good voice for him,
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Don't you mean handseals?
THE ABYSS HUNGERS FOR THE SOILS OF THESE STALLIONS
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Yes because darkus gave him that power darkus is literally Daniels 'evil' counterpart responding to his hatred
5:40 6:02. Can someone please tell me the animation that was used in this video right here also imagine all those guns pointing at the Boulder guy
kill ..... kill KILLL kill them all murder them render the flesh eat their bones make sure nothing remains
OK sorry if this offends anyone but I'm gonna say this he's been abused and raped so far and he has dealt with the loss of his mother and grandfather and bullying anything else I'm forgetting and at this point if there's more I think it's a little excessive and if he was raped he probably wouldn't have so much sex but that's my opinion because I don't know what it feels like to be raped