Daniel Blaze is a human who’s has lost the few people he had close to his heart and has experienced nothing but pain and suffering for years. But all changed when he was brought to a world ruled by anthro ponies, and other mythical creatures.
Page generated in 0.046 seconds
Total duration
999 users online
1,978,013 hits today, 2,707,512 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
not bad
loving so far :)
6011566 Thank you, and I promise, the story will get more interesting and entertaining.
Why are Twilight, Rarity, and Lyra infatuated with a creature they barely know?
This just gets better and better keep it up
6019462 Don't know about Twilight but Lyra because he's human and Rarity because she sees him as some sort of knight.
6024802
Doesn't change the fact that they barely know him.
Hmmmm.....I am waiting for that moment.
man spike is maaaad
Ok so let me get this straight they lock his arse and after a really unconvincing sorry for that he forgives them? Sorry if I don't believe that I mean I get why he said That to ditzy but still
This chapter has COMPLETELY affirmed that your character is a pussy.
Based on the cheek scar alone, i'm sure you were going for some Rurouni Kenshin styled individual, but... There's a difference between trying not to kill, and being a complete pussy.
Three dudes push you into shark infested waters, and you don't eviscerate them? You don't mash them into a bloody pulp? Yeah. Pussy. Complete pussy.
Seriously, tone down the edgyness. It's destroying your story. The 10 yr old black belt getting his ass handed to him by three bullies? UNBELIEVABLE.
6283273 I may not not know too much about karate,or anything of the sorts,rules,but I'm pretty sure,granted karate is supposed to be for self defense only,you really aren't supposed to use i in such situations,but instead be the man and walk away.Watch unbroken and see.what I mean,if you don't want to join the military if you haven't already.Granted I'm still young,I know that you hardly should ever fight back a bully,but instead walk away.I understand that his bullies went to a new extent of bullying,I feel as if he just didn't want to start stuff due to a kind heart.I've had plenty in my share of fights,especially "gangs"due to the fact I don't exactly live in the vest city.I learned to either walk away,unless the hit me,or try to,then I'll usually restrain them and literally throw them off.Who cares about that though.Point is,he is just.kind hearted,not a pussy.
6283273
6503897
I agree with legend here. Just because you don't seek out revenge for someone when they do something like that to you, even if it was extremely over the top, doesn't really mean your a pussy. I've always personally believed in second chances, if they deserve them, and I think he's got a kind heart and doesn't want to hurt them like they have him. That would make him just as bad as they were. It's like a moral.
Shipping detected!
I sense......A herd.....or possibly a harem........ I dunno
6283273
They could have taken him by surprise, ya know. If he didn't see 'em comin', how can he be prepared to defend himself? Duh... he can't.
that was a awesome and funny read i loved it all.
Space shuttles traveled in orbit, to dock with the I.S.S., right? I'm fairly sure none have ever made it as far as the moon. That was the Saturn V's job, right?
7029121
Well funny you should say that yes they do dock with the International space station. But man has walked on the moon.
The first man on the moon was Neil Armstrong, during one of the Apollo missions, unfortunaly he passed away a few years ago.
While he's naïve as can be, and edgy like no one's business, at least he isn't a bloody human bashing misanthrope... Also, a black and red (probably self-insert, power fantasy) OC? Need I make a condescendingly snarky remark on this subject? I think not...
(EDIT: Also, a "time of honour"? You're kidding... You're kidding, right? That's the most historically inaccurate and romanticized thing I've heard today!)
(EDIT: Also, on the concern of diet, there was no reaction to the consumption of cows, when he's never stated, not even in passing to a single being on this planet, that his was the only sapient race... There was also no point in which he mentions the name of his planet, so Twilight directly referencing that shit should have shot him in the foot with a red flag... Oh, and the whole cake thing? That could have had hay, or some flowers toxic to humans... Congrats, Pinkie, you poisoned the alien. On that note, who knows what the foreign thing called magic is doing to him? The healing spells might have had side effects, considering the new biology it has to work with...)
6797345 FIRING MAIN CANNON.
6283273 Yeah, seriously, this is fucking ridiculous...
7288909
Naturally. It's their secret of survival in a very nasty world.
Mfw it took me three years to lose virginity and this man is about to have a threesome with horse waifus after like five days.
Hata ahora parece que va bien
Ehhhh no, a Jet fighter can indeed break the sound barrier, but I doubt it’ll shatter the light spectrum like you can RD, :p
Canine. K-nine sounds like a bullet round
I feel like this chapter wasn't appropriately named