Tanks for the Wake-Up Call

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Rainbow has gone three months without Tank by her side. Now, it's time to get him back.

Based on the ending of the episode Tanks for the Memories.

Preread by ZOMG!
Edited by Zodiacspear!

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Muggonny

Muggonny #1 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

Because of one episode, there is already so many Tank puns... I can't wait to read this.

LtMajorDude

LtMajorDude #2 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

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I WANT A KING OF THE HILL PUN EPISODE TITLE

hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #3 · Apr 26th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Dawwwwwww.

"Tank, this is for you. Since we were apart for Hearth's Warming, I figured I would keep this by my side until I could finally wake you up."

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww

Skeeter The Lurker

Skeeter The Lurker #4 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

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No. Just no.

~Skeeter The Lurker

LtMajorDude

LtMajorDude #5 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

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Yes. Just yes.

~Ltmajordude

Skeeter The Lurker

Skeeter The Lurker #6 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

Not bad, dude.

Short, sweet, and to the point. It works well.

~Skeeter The Lurker

LtMajorDude

LtMajorDude #7 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

Now for the comment actually involving the story:

I thought it was pretty sweet and nice. Pretty good short story there! You deserve a like, favorite, and a follow!

misskoifishpony

misskoifishpony #8 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

DAWW the perfect follow up Fanfic for "Tanks for the Memories" I know! How can you not write something after watching that episode?!
I actually wrote a poem for the episode. It's in the middle of publishing on fan fiction. It would mean so much if you could read it:
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11209758/1/I-Will-Dream-Of-You
Anyway, all the characters were in character, and their interactions were great. I was expecting something different for Rainbow's Hearthwarming gift to Tank, but the slippers work. Haha lol I loved how you added Clear Skies and Open Skies into this story and that you gave that one mare a name Sunshower, that's the perfect name for her! Yes, the fanfics for these background characters are growing! Hallejuah! All that it was missing was Fluffy Clouds. Anyway, great job on this story.

Awesomo3000

Awesomo3000 #9 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

A sweet follow up to a sweet episode.

Pearple Prose

Pearple Prose #10 · Apr 26th, 2015 · 4 · ·

Not bad! Narration is cogent and the premise is simple and cute. The dialogue was very awkward, however, and there's lots of things you explain that didn't need to be explained (and sometiimes these two habits crossed over into stuff like this: "Wait, a tortoise? I'd never expect such a slow animal as a pet of the speed-demon known as Rainbow Dash[...]")

Still, this was quite nice. Have an upvote from me.

Helblade Master