Rainbow Dash has a great fear of the dentist. So when she needs to go thanks to a bad tooth, can she work up the courage to go? Or will her friends need to step in? Probably the latter.
My first ever fanfiction. Keep in mind I wanted to start with something very simple for my first story. Don't expect anything deep or serious in here. I'll do something better next story. Any compliments or constructive criticism is acceptable.
I would also like to thank my friends Cat Price for the pre-reading, and Hunter Bley AKA "Clade Earthsong" for his help and suggestions.
Thank you so much.
Enjoy.
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There's nothing to fear but fear itself.
-Franklin Delano Roosevelt
(Plus cool Fanfic ^^)
Daww, very heartfelt.
Nicely done!
Pretty good.
Everyone gets scared of the dentist at some point. Having a rather careless one certainly doesn't help.
I really liked it. Truly reminded me of the shows writing. Fantastic Job.
5175386 ...and excruciating pain, can't forget that. You definately have to be afraid of that.
I really like it.
Waiting for your others:)))
5176226 Or someone who nearly breaks your legs...... Yeah, not my best memory.
You could do with some editing (and a slightly better ear for style and focus) but this was a pretty good first fanfiction.
Also, this is a heck of a coincidence.
Does anypony else want a sequal where Twilight goes to the doctor?
5252195 YES!
The show really needs an episode like this.
After reading this for at least the fourth time, I can safely say that this fic is excellent.
The only problem I have with it is when she decides to tell her friends about her fear.
I feel that the only way Rainbow would admit to being afraid of the dentist would be if either Applejack tied her up with her lasso, or Twilight and Rarity used their magic to force her to stay still.
But, until an episode like this actually happens, we'll never know for sure what it would take to get her to admit it.
So, what was wrong with Dashie's teeth?
I completely understand Rainbow in this...
The dentist isn't exactly my favorite person either
I actually went looking for a story like this to get some advice cause I woke up this morning and found I can't have anything cold on the left side of my mouth...
(doesn't help I don't brush as often as I should)
I once impressed a dentist because I waited through an abscessed tooth. They also thought I was being negligent with my health but that was kind of a given.
I can't believe that this is from 2014💔 I miss old MLP. The episodes may be over, BUT THE FANDOM IS. NOT. OVER!!!
I loved this story! The writing is really good considering it's from 2014. I think this would've made a really good episode, though I think they already did an episode with the message that people(ponies) have to face their fears.
I luv this❤️
Unrelated, but today I watched the MLP movie! I loved it!!!!