Nice to see another chapter of this story. I wonder what Twilight really thinks about Titus.

Pinkie Pies breasts. Weapons of Mass Fun!

"So, what are humans like?"

You could lock three in a room together, ask for an opinion and get six different answers.

there were very few female influences with politics or sports or anything like that for the longest time.

Actually, there were many female influences; they just weren't acting on the stage.

In most of history, most women were in a supportive role rather than a submissive one.
In the stone age, men hunted the protein; women harvested the calories.
In ancient times, there were female gladiators, and women supported the viking raiders.
In a French court, it was the nagging wives who influenced their husbands in political games more than the men themselves.
In medieval times, men plowed, fixed their tools and sometimes weaved; women weaved, fixed their tools and sometimes plowed.

It wasn't until the 1800s in the factories that sexism really became about rights to live freely rather than power to control things. Men and women split their work in factories, and when wages rose high enough, women were no longer hired in the factories and were removed to the home-place, where they were much more confined.
And then came this democracy stuff that gave rights to men; whereas before, no one had any rights.

Pinkies breasts should only be referred to as funbags.

To be honest, I am very suspicious of how I got hooked up so well. I mean, I had the shittiest of luck back on Earth. But here, here is where my luck turned around? It's all confusing, as if somebody planned this all out according to a script.

Well, duh. Someone is writing you.

6247639 Ah, I didn't do much research, mainly because I'm basing it off of Titus' education-- which he didn't get much of during his upbringing.

Pinkiepie. The master of scaring people.

And Pinkie goes overboard with the greetings, again.

Ha ha, nice! Good job!

Oh Pinkie, can you not just ONCE simply walk up to somebody, stretch out your hand/Hoof and politley and calmly ask them how they are doing?

6248029 SSHHHH SHUSH!! DON'T TELL HIM!!!!

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Oft people forget that if the character is a bit ignorant than the views the characters express aren't going to be well informed.

6252695 Valentine: Can't you just say 'Hello' like a normal person?

Dammit Pinkie...

6273799 I don't plan on having full blown clop until the later chapters, I want relationships to develop

6273849 Well first of all, thank you for your generous "constructive" criticism. Take note, that I am an amateur writer. I'm not a graduate of the "All American Writer's Club". I feel it rather useless to judge my writing skills as if I were professional, or compare my writings to that of better quality. I'm not a best selling author, I'm a guy who is trying to expand his horizons and test the waters. You're obviously a well matured shark browsing through this website and reading fanfiction. I have no doubts that you have seen better content, and so have I. If you've been on here a while, good for you, but you don't have to bite my ass like I'm a guy who could do better. I'm still trying to find out who I am in the literature world, and where my skills are best set. This story may have giant holes in them, but that's because they're only practice, and if people find entertainment reading these stories then god bless them. Other than that, could you delve a little deeper into what my situation is before you judge me? I don't know whether or not you're trying to be constructive, but it seemed like you were being kind of shitty in my eyes; if that's just your style of criticism, then god bless ya, but take it somewhere else. If you're not gonna say anything nice (or constructive) don't say anything at all. Thank you for taking your time to read my content, have a nice day.

At the end I couldn't help but think of the GTA V "Wasted" death screen. And as always, Pinkie has H-cups or bigger. But hey, Celestia probably has a KKK-cup for all we know.

6247635 more like lock 3 in a room and see them tear each other apart...

Well aside from the bad joke you made, I have no real complaints to this fic...

6408517 Maybe :3

This is pretty good so far wanting some more chapters to read, its interesting and its making me want to know whats going to happen next.

Oh-no. It's Pinkie!

I'm sad that this story was canceled. I'll be happy to take it over for you.

I was hoping for more from the story but it's sad you canceled it. Can I continue the story please?

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Can I have some writing reference? If you have any

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So how do you want me to send a reference and is there anything you should let me know about it?

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You may send me reference through messaging on this site, afterwards I will detail you with the story's plot.

Any reason this got cancelled?

why is it cancelled did something went bad?

Down vote for canceled. Shallow? Yes. But that's garbage.