OK, so here is my story on love, loss and how I became a colourful horse.
Living alone in the plight of the HLF can be dangerous but being a pony in that situation is even more so, and I'm about to do exactly that
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Shadow Fury
i like to read the fics mainly the romantic ones im a cheesy basted like that oh and i write shitty ones if you wana check em out
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This is probably the first time I've ever actually seen someone use the word 'fuck' in the story summary.
interesting
i am sure i read a story very similar to this...
but still it was good
(also this guy seems a bit on the fucked up side of things)
A/N: thanks to DaBunnanaKing for reading and editing for me could not have made it any better cheers man
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He could have done a lot more. Your spelling and grammar is terrible, your character is a Sympathy Sue, your premise is terribly cliche, and TCB fics are incredibly overdone. I'm sorry, but this is quite bad.
Good day.
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What was exactly the whole reason for that scenario? Oh, so we can establish that he's somehow trained with weapon disarming (and more I reckon) at the age of 17 and is a deeply troubled soul.
I don't mean to be picky, and my knowledge of TCB is extremely thin, but this isn't some wasteland-ish Earth where you need you learn combat skills to survive. Just correct me if I'm wrong.
Wait, what did you want to tell me, Shadow, on the other story?
Everything i said earlier is improved
Now you just need a better quality story
WAT
I'll be hoping for another chapter sir.
The Father of Time, seems intrested in this.
Okay I'm going to keep this short...
1. The killer looked at a corpse and it then said he/she held the heads up by their hair...(Corpse is one dead person so where did the others come from, you need to describe the deaths beforehand like how the killer did this to each family member)
A women suddenly comes home, screams and somehow chokes on her own blood? WTF How?
Does she scream so loudly that her throat just bleeds from the inside?
2. This really needs an editor and the author needs to consider revising grammar and spell checking
I can't read this story anymore because...its unreadable to me and it doesn't deserve my thumbs up or a track.
I'm just being honest
592083
Lol, you think that's young? You should read my story, you will probubly scream at me.
Not as bad as other fan fics but I digress, that's not saying its good. No character or setting development, numerous mistakes, a obvious contradiction (you're poor, but you have the cash to buy a gun with a full clip?), the clichéd renegade badboy character (more specific: I'm a badass, foul mouth person, with a pointless dark past teenager blah, blah, blah, that has been done to death). I'm not the best writer but this from my knowledge, this looks like something I'd find in a Hollywood movie; something not to be proud of.
593128
This^
I'm tempted to just clean slate TCB stories, though I'm pretty sure people have had enough of TBC do to the amount of venting into the stories that happens.
You know it hasn't been finished.
591770 Thats because it's not done.
592083 no it is not waste land-ish but if you had your parents murdered you would like to make sure you could survive
Honestly, I like most TCB fics, as overdone as people say they are.
But this one...was well:
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591282 594289 592574 592485 592255 592083 591770 Sorry about all that guys I was told to be less hasty with the uploading and it has been redone, the gore is still there but the editing has been done, please feel free to re-read and have a more pleasant read - I must go now my people need me>>594858