Fluttershy loses one of her best friends, and doesn't know how to deal with the depression. Will she contain her insanity, or will everypony be in danger of her wrath?
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shadowdemon137
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Hehe, I actually made this story last year. I just now decided to put it on FiMfiction.
Disregarding the fact that there'd be such an elaborate funeral for a rabbit (it's Equestria though, so that might be up for debate)... I think it would be a good idea to study up on the five stages of grief, as well as treat this matter in a way that's completely serious. Fluttershy seems... oddly bombastic, the opposite reaction that I would expect from her in this type of situation.
Still, that's my opinion. Your writing on it's own is actually pretty good.
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Thank you
I've been told a lot (and believe so myself) that I am the embodiment of Fluttershy. When I wrote this, I thought of what she would do and what I would do, in some cases. I do agree that she does act a bit out of character, but then again, she hasn't been in this type of situation before, so it could happen.
And the funeral, idk xD
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This story is actually in the weird place where it ends in a place where I can leave it and that's that, or I could try continuing it. I probably will try my best to continue this, but for now it's complete as far as I can tell.
This is an excellent story! When is the next chapter going to come out?
You’re going to wish you had loved me.
That sent shivers down my neck.
I love this fic! Your verbs are eloborate and the plot line in general is awsome!
Why my darling, you should write even more for your beloved fans, like a sequel!
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I can't wait for the next chapter :3
we'll that's sad that the fic,nerves got finish :/
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My apologies. I've been in a deep pit of no motivation for a while now and haven't done anything in terms of anything, really. To answer your comment: I don't know. It can be stopped here and left to the reader's imagination or I can finish it if I get the inspiration and motivation. Apologies again.
You sure you have the bunny there fluttershy?