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Dat author's note tho.

So... I don't think there's any way I can express all the words I have for the, uhh, 'exploits' this chapter had. They were all so fascinating, if I can use that word for all this. BUT!!! I can say that those touching moments with Sonata were my favorite parts of the whole thing. She's so sweet, and that makes her sadness all the more impactful. Great chapter my man. Can't wait for the next one!

6301966 It was a teensy bit sexually charged, but I kinda wanted to get some development in on just how fluid and without boundaries our little group is becoming, but I'll agree with you totally, Sonata lamenting the immortal's curse was my favorite part to write, and since you like it... Well the next chapter will be all the better for you Aloha

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"Teensy bit" lawl. What an understatement. Good stuff though, no complaints from me!

Mahalo means Thank you.... Ohana means Family. sorry just a minor correction.

6303251 Woops! Thanks for that catch, really should have googled that one hehe.

Sexy and sweet. Nice chapter.

6302064 love the chapter and I could go for some living forever the things one would see watching your plans taking form over the years decades, centuries is worth the small price of loved ones being nothing but dust in the wind when all of the world (and beyond) is your play thing.

6303662 no one said they arrived in the human world first after their exile

I've heard of hot but that burned my mind.

6306384 subtropical in November, I Consider it a success lol.

6307578 I agree.

That was great Everything that happened was quite interesting and yep I think there are no barriers in the relationships of these girls. Also imagining Sonata doing a fire dance was awesome I wish there was a pic of that it would be so cool. I would do it myself but I'm not a good artist So I hope I can make formal request and someone would make one for me please!!! That was an awesome chapter I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.

i just started read fanfic not to long ago and i have to say this is the best one i read so far

6322121 Aww thank you!

6356737 I do have an editor now! It has made the whole event significantly less derp by taking away a ton of the silly mistakes I tend to make, be forewarned I've not yet run back and made changes to every chapter so expect them to still be a bit rough. Regardless hope you enjoy the rest!

Hot damn, that was... well, HOT!

Fffffuuuuuuu-dging awesome!
Seriously , why has there been no fan art for this!?
I'd love to see a luau sonata! or sunset carrying her and pinkie. Damn she's strong.

also, love the performances, pinkie and flutters were my favorites.
And just, hot damn, this is so awesome! Really wish I was tapping this out on mobile. Just imagine there are context appropriate emoticons and more of my highlighting my favorite parts!

also also...flame fetish :p

Oh, and Pinkies show? I kneaded that in my life *ba dum pssshhh*

Erm, Chpater 17?

*Pun incoming*
Are you God? Cause I'm fairly certain that was heaven.

But no, in all seriousness, I absolutely adore this fic. The balance of heavy, light, and spicy is astounding and I love every second.

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I know this comment is kinda old, but I can't resist a pun. Replying is the yeast I can do. Events in this story certainly got a rise out of me! And where puns are concerned, it's batter to be safe than sorry. I'm on a roll here, and I loaf this story. I am almost done with puns, no need to pan-ic.