College is an interesting part of life. This becomes doubly true for one Sunset Shimmer when old enemies reappear in her life, asking for friendship no less!
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All I have to say is wow I think you defiantly addressed that Pinkie Pie is a friend with benefits Also I like how the Sirens got the other couples tension fixed I would say this would be an end to a story but the beginning of a new Though you marked incomplete so I'm happy about that but also if I was writing I probably would have ended it there but would start another story right after it Though that would be how I would organize it so without further adieu I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you
6002436 hmm interesting idea. I intended this to end my first act, the idea being to get on to my next plot thread. I may consider breaking this into more stories, but there will be much more of this content to come very soon!
6002858 finally! Someone laughs at the awful joke!!!
6004981 as a novice either writer I'm most content to say it's likely going to be the latter until I really start to pull into primary plot threads and character arcs. Up to the latest chapter I'm just sorta introducing characters and setting the stage up for what is to come.
I am super glad you're enjoying it though! I'm having a boat load of fun writing this kind of thing for the first time.
I'm really enjoying this story, Its a wonderful clop that is for sure but also just the thoughts behind the story itself is wonderful! I like the entire relationship thing; I think its marvales!
6006257 I'm all about the creative licence and giving characters traits that make them a bit more stand out. Also it's college, everyone smokes pot at least once in college
6006276 I'm glad it's been a fun ride! I like to think I give it giod plot and manage to keep it saucy
6006354 I see what you did there lol *giggles*
You mean rainbow did that. Don't think rarity's neck is that flexible.
Isn't rarity the near nude woman? Nothing the lyrics at herself? I think you meant she was mouthing to rainbow
That student made sunset what? I think there is either an extra comma, or a missing action before she finished her beer
*tomorrow
Sorry for ask the nitpicking, just wanting to help is all. Can't wait for the next chapters!
6006781 bah damn my lack of editing, I shall chabge those shortly and please never hesitate to direct my attention to something, I really appreciate it!
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No problem! Usually I'm on my mobile, but I just learned I can easily copy-paste between the browser and my onenote app
I love to give a helping hand! Take it as a testament to how much I care about the story
Also did you do this by accident, or are you fucking with me?
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Sirens mate with former unicorns* as well
*I dub then formercorns
6006826 Fucking hell! Mobile phone friend it kills my English.
Formercorns now headcannon.
Hoooot!
Rarity sounds really flexible. I wonder what else that is good for...
Also, if Applejack was the Sweet Appleacres apple bobbing champion, she could be Applebob! Like Spongebob but made of Apples!
6008770 I admit that scene was my baby, I always envisioned college Rares as taking pole dancing fitness classes.
ARE YA READY KIDS?!
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It's cool, I can totally sympathize with your mobile woes
Also Formercorns FTW
Your sex scenes are definitely improving compared to earlier chapters, but the way you described the dance was amazing. Keep it up!
6022053 Most excellent! Very glad I'm showing some progression!
Not sure if you're following me on dA, but I think you might dig my latest piece in relevance to this story. (Not inspired by this fic, but after finishing the artwork and looking at it for a while, I couldn't help but think of martial-artist Sunset, heh.)
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Also - view count FTW when I opened the page just now.
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6024968 well maybe it's the fact that I am just now seeing this art and count at the beach, bourbon and cigar in my hands, but I just smiled my biggest smile ever. I think this comment wins for best thing I've gotten on the internet. Also... Adagio as a workout buddy... I believe I may be needing to write something here shortly...
Tangentially related note, I need to start using my DA account now lol!
Trixie calls copyrights infringement!!!
6051002 got it in one, I'm a fan of his stuff, despite the fact that it can be creepy and saccharine. Ya punny bastard
"as the swooping back onto the pole Rarity abandoned" my love for hyphens you share not, but this was a little confounding
"worried for the safety of Apple Jack" - gotta love that autocorrect?
"The with a cheeky smile" - then
"That contact was immediately broken when Aria leaned over Sunset’s head" Aria should be Sonata
"I was doomed to just be these girl’s plaything" - girls'
"the hangover I’ll suffer from the reverie is sure to be terrible" - revelry?
'moxy' - moxie
Applejack is so silly. what could she possibly expect from the deck that would be less intimate than a kiss? hahaha the evil in Sunset, ah you're terrible
"Rarity and AJ had already disappeared, Fluttershy giving Pinkie a high five" - huh now when did those two get back? "Game intermissions at this sleepover were just the best." AHAHAHAHA this is the best game.
I like that Pinkie still asks for Sunset's okay. it makes sense for Sunset to have kept turning her down though, being a virgin and all... which makes it weird that she "never saw sex as special" I love that Sunset was all worried about everyone else to Adagio, but Adagio was just worried about Sunset. (what are the best post sex video games?) "twenty minutes in the lust pit" would make the best card.
right, the WINE lulls her to sleep. not the everything else. but I don't suppose Adagio got too much action herself huh?
Because it doesn't seem anyone else caught it:
"Pinkie and Sonata looted at one and other" - Looked
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Am i messed up for wanting to see Rarity actually do this?
Btw, This right here made my day.