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A frustrated writer who just wants people to like their stories.

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The Equestrian Civil War finally reaches its peak, as the two armies of both sides converge in the small rural town of Ponyville. Here, the blood of friends shall be shed, as three days of awful fighting would test a nation that was once filled with friendship and harmony.

(Inspired by the actual battle of Gettysburg)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 11 )

This could be good, looking forward to reading more. I'm not American, but I've always been interested in the civil war era. I could stand to learn a few more things about it.

*blows party cannon :pinkiehappy:

5889163 I'm glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

Wow. Just wow. My God, you're so good at writing!

That story is amazing! Although I can clearly find a few errors in the grammar, and the plot is simple, yet you make it one of the most interesting one I've ever read on this website. Honest!

I'd be more than happy to beta-read it, if you don't mind! I'd like to improve this amazing piece of art as much as my feeble abilities with English can. :twilightsmile:

7455373 Thank you! And thank you for the offer, but I'm sorry to say that this story is more or less cancelled. I haven't changed the status of it before because I was always hopeful that I might get back to it, but after over a year without giving it an update, I think its time to close it down. Sorry about that. :fluttershysad:

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Oh. Well, it's a shame, really. I guess if you aren't able, or don't want, to go on with it, for a reason or another, I can't really prevent it, now can I?

Anyway, thanks for answering, and I'm sorry for wasting your time. :fluttershysad:

7456538 Nah, it's no problem, bro.

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Well, prior to the Civil War, most of Americas best generals were men from the South. Plus the Rebels had Robert E. Lee

The aftermath of this fiction story's war may result in some hatred never truly dying and someone's assassination in the aftermath as well.

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