To Be Friendship

Twilight begins seeing an odd figure around town about the same time as other ponies die. Is there a monster among them? Or does it go deeper? After experiencing one horrific event, her quest for answers leads her to Celestia where she learns the secrets of the Alicorns, and her destiny. will she accept it, or crumble before it's near impossibility?

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Twilight Shine

Twilight Shine #1 · Apr 17th, 2015 · · ·

If only there was another chapter.

sweet_dream

sweet_dream #2 · Apr 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I usually don't hold to the idea that all Alicorns are immortal, but I really like this take on things. I also really like Twilight's perspective at the end. Nice job. ^_^

Lunafan1k

Lunafan1k #3 · Apr 17th, 2015 · · ·

5874919 thanks! The ending was the hardest part, I didn't want it to be rushed or feel forced and for the longest time I couldn't figure it out. I though of this ending the other night and I'm glad it turned out so well!

Moosetasm

Moosetasm #4 · May 30th, 2015 · · ·

I think this was a very well done first person perspective story. A lot of the first person stories out there turn me off, but this one was engaging and stable in perspective.

I also like your theory. Good theories get the head cannons rolling.

Ocean Man