This story is a sequel to The Dragon Sage
After the events that took place in The Dragon Sage, Twilight and Spike have quietly started living and loving in their castle. Other ponies are bound to find out, so how will they respond? What does this mean for their friends and neighbors?
If you haven't read the previous story, I suggest it, but it is not necessary. Most characters and references to The Dragon Sage take a back seat role in this slice-of-life story. It's more as an extended epilogue than anything else.
wasn't expecting a sequel but love it anyways
You may proceed.
This should be fun!
why do I get the feeling that not all the ponies in town are going to be as happy for the two lovebirds?
These two don't beat around the bush...
loved the prequel and I love this good job
Right in the feels...!
I eat monsters
'm a wut?
mine !
That was another apple
Smorze please
I wana see a daddy Spike !
pan cakes !
eat wut?
so spike plays the monster...
Pinkie says she eats monsters.
Just consider, and wait for it to sink in.
Love this chapter!
And I smell children in their future!
Wow, those two are a surprisingly cute couple.
5879845 .....why you had to bring that up man
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someone has to call out the elephant in the room.
Great story soooo is Rarity next?
He was MY little Spikey Wikey!
You know what they say
Wut?
You can toss him double or nothing
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I would've also loved to ask Discord why he didn't affect Spike while he was turning Ponyville upside-down... or, perhaps, was it just because he was in the library?
Maybe it's just nitpicking, but I'll throw it out there anyway...
So Spike earlier implied they'd already had sex but dinner is a little soon?
Other than that, it's good.
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I was trying to imply that it was a little early for them to let everyone else in town know about their relationship.
I like the fact that Twilight let Dsicord loosen up a bit. Frankly that's a fair thing to do; the guy loves chaos, and honestly he can be interesting. The problem is he takes it too far, but with friends to let him know the boundaries, letting him do chaos can be a nice change of pace.
Good to see that in a story. Now hopefully the show does that as well.
I'm digging the slice-of-life style that this piece is following. Keep up the good work.
Noticed something, though.
This should probably be sight, unless you're emphasizing the location where the eggs landed over the picture of them doing so for some reason.
--Spade
5891375 Fixed. Thanks so much for reading. Glad you like the newer style.
5889543 Ah, sorry. My bad.
My thoughts? Update moar
Oh and I loved it
Big Mac ruined Spike . All he does is lay on the couch watching hoof ball AND EATING NACHOS all the time. No reading ,No breakfast in bed no cuddling , Just hoofball HOOFBALLHOOFBALL!
Well Twilight dear I'll take the gentledrake off your hooves.
GOALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!
You did this to yourself.......
This is an amazing sequel. Gotta figure that "Angel" Bunny was behind the cabbage issue. Never really liked that little [insert explicite noun here].
I loved the entire conversation. It seemed very in character and it's good to see these kinds of things happen for the story to feel "real." Keep up the great work.
So, what did he eat then?
Lightening- the act of making something light or lighter, to illuminate or brighten. Not to be confused with lightning, an electrostatic discharge during an electrical storm between electrically charged regions of a cloud.
I absolutely love this story, and the previous one. It does help to have editors though to lighten the load of writing.
You have been enlightened.
How is that not fair Twilight? It's not like you didn't have that advantage in the past.
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Fixed. Thanks so much for reading and for helping out. Glad you enjoy it.
5961214 No, thank you for making such an amazing story. I'm quite picky when it comes to reading fanfiction, because it's either too rushed, too badly misspelled or just plain bad. Novels like yours are like a breath of fresh, clean air in a polluted city, or a gemstone in a junkyard. I could just possibly be looking in all the wrong places, however.
Moar
Spike honestly wouldn't need to brush his teeth. He is an apex predator after all. Then again when you live with ponies you can't go around with a mouth smelling like carrion.
I can give it a shot.
pen & ink?
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I'll get the popcorn!
Cake Twins are in Spike's corner now.
Seriously Angel really needs a girlfriend.
Is Rainbow Dash jealous?
If Spike's grown up then maybe Pee Wee has too.
5962695 I imagine chewing on gemstones does wonders against plaque build-up.
The heartwarming is SO HOT IT MELTED MY SHIRT.
5968287 You want a horde of those running around? No thanks.
Good answer.
Awww, that was just too cute! I adored this chapter!!
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I was going to say something like that myself, but you expressed it so well that I thought I'd just quote you and give you a thumbs up! It was really sweet to see the interactions with Discord this chapter.
I'm glad your hand wasn't bitten off. Great chapter. I am so happy about the update. Good luck with the next chapter. I can't wait to read about the date.
What the gem cannon?!?!
That date is going to be so cute! I can't wait to see what they each got from Rarity