I write things. Pony things are among the things I write.
The she-demon was laughed off as a hoax. The giant alicorn in the sky firing lasers was dismissed as a clever prank. Despite all the weirdness going on at Canterlot High, the scientific community at large has mostly ignored them, and that's suited the Rainbooms just fine.
Unfortunately, they've failed to account for one important outlier. Twilight Sparkle. The other Twilight Sparkle that is...
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fuck yeah! twidash all the way! double twidash all the way across the sky!
Welp.
Interdimensional dating advice, eh?
This needs a sequel!!!
Yo, what about the human Sunset Shimmer?
Hey! Needs a sequel!!
That Star Trek part was totally awesome! Anyway, I loved this. I'm going to join the rapidly forming mob in chanting: Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
I GOTS ME A NEW HEADCANNON!
Things were going great...until the Twidash. I'm sorry, but that's completely unnecessary.
Bravo, Bravo! This fic scratch my icthy spot, 'where the hell is human version Twilight in EG', damm well!
LOVE IT! LOL
5856085 I Agree
The fic is great, I like how you portrayed human Twilight here but the thing that bothers me greatly this chapter is that pony Rainbow Dash doesn't notice human-turned-unicorn Twilight doesn't have wings.
5937069 That was because Twilight was wearing the lab coat and covering her barrel, so Rainbow didn't notice the lack of wings.
Now I'm wondering how Trixie had a scheduked appointment with Twilight if she was supposed to be in Saddle Arabia. That's some serious schedule mixup.
> falls through the portal
> continues taking notes like a baws
That was cute if, a bit... short. Hydra's whack, but not the world ending calamity that most EQG movies feature. Kept waiting for something to go horribly, horribly wrong.
5945734 Trixie really only follows one schedule. Hers.
5946375 Not every problem is a world ending calamity. Some problems just involve an irate hydra looking for a bite to eat.
Congratulations, Twilight! YOU'VE JUST BLOWN UP TWO WHOLE UNIVERSES!
Apart from the TwiDash (sorry, don't ship them) this is an excellent story that does a brilliant job filling in the empty void that is the character of human!Twilight Sparkle. Alicorn Twilight's appearance at the end is a bit of a deus ex machina but, thinking about it, what else would you expect from Discord?
I particularly liked how you used Lyra and Pinkie's weaponised cupcakes too! Poor Twilight had a difficult introduction to an alien world, all told. Then again, didn't her counterpart go through much the same?
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Sounds like a "Romance" tag is in order then.
THE MANURE HAS HIT THE AIR DEVICE!!!!!!!!!!!
Would love to see a sequel to this
Not really a fan of the TwiDash (never been my thing, and liking SunLight a lot doesn't help) but it was small enough and the rest very good!
Especially the whole Discord/Q thing.
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I've read worse. Much worse. I say the flow is well paced, the subject is safe, and the chapter length is perfect.
All in all, no negatives vs. one positive. So, good
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oh don't mind those comments. that was back in early 2017, where i went through my retarded phase.
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K. Does that mean your opinion has changed? Cause I wanna hear what it is, if it has.
That had to be the best line ever.
Dash is fairly funny here too.
If the plot points of Friendship Games had to be covered in 22 minutes, this would've been a great way to pull it off. Assertive Sci-Twi, DisQord, EqG humans in Equestria... Honestly, I wish I'd read this story years ago. Thank you for it.
Seriously this neeeds more! This is great!
sad this never got a sequel