Erin and Riley are two orphaned children who live with their adoptive Uncle on the outskirts of Melbourne. They are attacked by a mysterious organisation known as the KAE, teleported to Equestria by an unknown force and taken in by a caring Fluttershy.
Note: Anthro tag is only for Fluttershy. The ponies are still ponies in this story.
Hey everypony. This is an idea that I've had in my head for a while now and I thought I'd get it out there.
I have added some references to video games in this story so any reference that I use belongs to the creators of that particular game.
I do not own My Little Pony Friendship is Magic.
Big thanks to my editor:
Serebii
Also a big thanks to my cover artist:
JazzyQ
And my friends: (Xbox)
RacingxXxBanana
RagingRedneck49
If there is anything that any of you want to know or have in the story, leave a comment and I'll incorporate your ideas.
moar?
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Absolutely, working on next chapter right now
5866888 yaaaaaay!
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Do you like the story?
5866988 Very much so far! You really caught my attention with the whole controlling the elements thing and the tracker was a surprise too. In my opinion this is bound to turn it good!!
(And I'm not just sucking up!)
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Thanks mate really appreciate it. I'll try to have the next chapter out by tomorrow
5867156 I'll be use to watch for it.
And no problem!
more!
You could try not explaining how the characters have all the powers. It sounds like you are having them swear to try to make yourself look more confident as an author. Villains that have no sympathy are bad, and ones like that who monologue are worse, and the worst is ones like both of those who are easy to defeat.
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I do know that ferret, but imagine how lost you would be if the fic started with these kids that have these crazy powers I can bet that everyone would be confused. And about the KAE, they are not the main villains. I am giving away a little bit of spoilers but the main villain is the last pony you'd expect, I've planned ahead a little bit.
Moaaaaaar! I can't wait till fridaaaay!
It's sooo far awaaahaaahaahaaaay!
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I got heaps of free time recently
Actually I'm going to post another chapter tonight or tomorrow
5972011 yay~!
I still needs moar! I wanna know why happened to shy! XD
Blatant bioshock reference :P
I honestly am cringing at the fact of fluttershy being made an elemental... and the anthro tag is about fluttershy? I know where that is going, sorry but this story doesn't interest me the most i may come back later, but this isn't MY taste, i know it is someone elses, so keep writing but as soon as i heard of her changing, i just was sad. Continue and i may come back eventually
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It's cool dude. I'm just glad you didn't dislike it but I understand that some people don't like anthro.
5997014 thing is, i can deal with anthro, but its transforming from pony --->anthro
or human----> pony i can't deal with. I will admit anthro isn't my forte but i do read some
I really wish you would make the chapters longer, but it's still a good story all together!
Keep up the good work dood.
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Thanks mate. If I tried to do longer chapters, I wouldn't be able to do any schoolwork. It's even a pain in the ass for me to write at the moment but I still try.
6006706 I know how you feel dood. You got my respect just by being able to write a steady chapter as is! I started a story but I put it on haltus because I had too much going on at school and such. Atleast you know your limits! *claps* Good Job! :)
Ooooo! CLIFF HANGER~!
I JUST READ THE SPIDERMAN FIMFIC!!
How dare you leave off here just when it started to pick up speed >:(
(Emoticons don't work.)
*and suddenly a net cannon got shot through the door*
WITH OUR POWERS UNITE WE ARE
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when i read the last words...
Riley approached the front door and turned the knob.
https://youtu.be/Tl3euCXhpaQ
also, are you working on next chapter?
this is the only fanfic that is really good and the one that captivates me.
i wonder how celestia reacts to human fluttershy
When will you update.