very good
and very touching
and if your looking for a name (unless you already have one planned)
might i recommend Hazel

5875221 I don't have one planned yet. Thank you, i'll take that one into consideration, but keep in mind this is, in a way, a collaboration with a friend who did the art and is the creator of Java. I have to hear her input to the story before I make any plans.

5875221 I talked to her and I believe we are going to use the name. Thank you. To all you guys who are enjoying the story. The next chapter might take a bit. I've been a bit sick and haven't really planned for the next chapter. I'm sure it will be out pretty soon, but if not I promise I will continue whenever something comes to me.

5897886 wow thanks
Get well soon
Don't push yourself

5898038 It's nothing serious. GI issues. Just painful. Thanks for the concern though.

Working on chapter 6. It's slow going, but i'm learning about things I need to write as I write.

5957221 Well thank you. Glad you enjoyed

Hey, just popping in to say hi
Hope everything is going good for you

6132620 It is. Still working on how I want the story to go. Not quite sure yet, so this chapter is taking a lot longer than I was hoping. Damn indecisiveness.

I know this story has been probably long cancelled but it was still sad to come back from so long to discover this, really enjoyed where this was going, well i hope you're doing good, wherever you are