Fade has held a secret love of his employer Java Joy, the clumsy coffee shop mare. What will happen between these two? Read and find out. This story is romance with some comedy coming from Java's clumsey incidents.
Actually, that would be greatly appreciated. Yes, the relationship was rushed, but eh, I have a lot planned for this and I wanted to try and get most of it knocked out before spring break was over. I failed, but still I got a lot done. I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the read. 5851676
even though your writing does need more work you have done a great job on fade and java's personality making a character or characters with a personality that makes the reader care about and want to know more about them is not an easy thing and i can honestly say you succeeded
look forward to seeing where this goes
edit - is there a place where jinx uploads her art
5863820 On another note, I know my writing needs work. I rush myself when writing for time reasons. I've stepped away from that and am trying to do better with grammar and spelling.
Well, a slight comedic bit in a clop chapter. I really love what you did there with the instinct telling Fade to shut up and listen to it. Wonderful, Echelon!
Actually, that would be greatly appreciated. Yes, the relationship was rushed, but eh, I have a lot planned for this and I wanted to try and get most of it knocked out before spring break was over. I failed, but still I got a lot done. I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the read.
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5851676 After all, every good writer, needs a good editor. Mistakes are bound to happen. That's why once there made, you learn from them.
even though your writing does need more work
you have done a great job on fade and java's personality
making a character or characters with a personality that makes the reader care about and want to know more about them is not an easy thing and i can honestly say you succeeded
look forward to seeing where this goes
edit - is there a place where jinx uploads her art
5863820 I think so. I'm not to sure. She was doing commissions, but she is on hiatus for some personal issues.
5863820 On another note, I know my writing needs work. I rush myself when writing for time reasons. I've stepped away from that and am trying to do better with grammar and spelling.
5866964 that's cool
keep up the good work
you have real potential
5867423 Yeah, I know about that. I just do it my own way. I'm weird like that. Glad you like it though. Thanks a ton.
5867405 Oh, XD I think I was up at like 4 in the morning typing that. That could explain it. I'll fix it when i'm done with the current chapter.
5867423 I fixed the inconsistency. I'll take italicizing thoughts into consideration, though at this point couldn't it confuse some readers?
Well, a slight comedic bit in a clop chapter. I really love what you did there with the instinct telling Fade to shut up and listen to it. Wonderful, Echelon!