Pinkie Pie is best pony. (Though all my fics are about Spike and Rarity.)
Spike asks Rarity a question she is 100% unprepared to answer.
Takes place several years into the future. Established Spike/Rarity. Could be considered a oneshot follow-up to either “Of Age” or “How to Woo Your Lady in 9 Easy Steps”, but requires no background knowledge of my previous fics.
Page generated in 0.174 seconds
Total duration
1,009 users online
1,908,849 hits today, 2,591,549 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
awww this is Sparity at its best
typo
___1
She put on hoof to her lips.
put one hoof
___
Nice little story, especially the last line, also it's good to see you writing again.
Super adorable!
I'm so happy of reading a story from your again. It just brighten my day a lot : )
And my pervy mind can't stop thinking what... welll... anyways, I also thought adopting could be an option, and I can totaly understand Rare's position. I wasn't prepared to be a mother either, nor now I think I am, although sometimes life can bring you surprises, and you just have to... adapt. xD
And I'm sure whatever whe case is, they'll be great parents.
Spikey we have to put off the adoption a little if not a bunch more
Why? Watsup?
Your going to be a father
So we're adopting ?
No. . .Not yet
What??
Aaaaaw, cute
This is the kind of Sparity I love to read. Simple and well written! This fic reminds me of "Change for You" by TrueBlueSpark because they're similar in a lot of ways.
Have my fattest finger up.
You came back with 2 one shots. Way to make an entrance. :)
5797629 What a twist!
I would totally read a story like that though.
Nice idea to an interesting topic of discussion. I found it both cute and mature considering the subject of discussion.
Please do keep up the good work upon future stories like this one.
Sparitibetes!
D'aawww-
[youtube=LIVqNsiUAmM]
So cute!
Onto the bookshelf you go.
--Spade
Well timeline time lets see hmmm.
First: How to Woo Your Lady in 9 Easy Steps
Second: Of Ages
Third: Spike and Rarity, Sitting in a Tree
Good god I just made your timeline that well be $20 lol.
You ain't gettin' any younger, Rarity. Nopony gets ready for kids. The practice of dealing with kid-craziness makes you able to handle them.
great fic, I love it
It was . . . okay. There wasn't enough substance for it to be good, though.
Not bad for a one off, and I'm glad to see you're still active with your favorite pairing. Question is, did you just have to scratch an itch or is this a preview of coming attractions?
-Erico
Ha, cute. And heeey, didn't even realize you also did "Of Age". That was fun too.
One thing, the "one week later" is kinda lazy writing. As always, I suggest weaving the time into the narrative in all cases, unless you are going for either spyish/militarish fic, diary or historic-style epic and in all those cases, dates and locations should be more precise. It could have easily been "One week later, Spike found himself pacing" or something like that. Easy as pie.
Happy writing.
Nice to see you back in business, and writing for such a great pairing!
Too bad the fic is... short, and it's just two scenes. nothing more, or less. That doesn't say that one-offs are bad, or worse, but this one lacks depth. A basic three-part structure would be an improvement.
There is no build-up, no tense, no humour. Just two characters saying that they will discuss something, and then three lines of that discussion. And I agree with @Frazzled-Pony, "One week later" is lazy. And the whole scene looks like a business meeting.
Still, it's great to know that you are back, just for the new season!
Awww, this was beautiful :')
AT first I thought "Why would someday be his favorite word?" Then I remember Rarity cock blocked him for like... a decade. So that makes sense.
A spell that will allow two different species to conceive, hmm... I have a spell for just the situation. Not that any one would care.
You really put a lot of thought into your characterizations, don't you?
omg this is one of my favorite ships
Great story.
