"Don't judge me by my failures, but only by my dreams."
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Can a convicted murderer be with a princess? Can a dragon and a pony be accepted together? Should Alicorns avoid the pain of loving someone they will outlive? Is it possible for ponies from different worlds and races to be together in a world of doubt and divisiveness? And more importantly, will they survive the new evil rising long enough to find out? *Multiple ships feat*
Sparity and lots of OC love amongst the Mane 6.
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Is there any point that Daring Do possibly can be de-fossilized?? I know the chapter mentioned that she would be forever turned to stone, but this is a magical land if I remember correctly. And just like in the show, I would hope that there is Fluttershy there to do her Stare on a cockatrice so they could rescue Daring Do.
Also, in general, I do hope that this story gets back on track quickly. First we were seeing a pony (I have to assume according to the image that the character is a batpony alicorn (bat wings, horn) He escapes from Tatarus, we see mentions that this may be related to episodes 220, 425 and 426 due to Cerebus running away and Tirek escaping as well, then it's like a complete 180 with Daring Do and Azihotl...there is a lot of
in my mind because of the sudden scene changes. Simply put, I'm a bit confused. there has to be some connections, otherwise this story isn't gonna last long.
5836946 Because this is a multi-character focused story, it's jumping around a lot because there are numerous characters to keep track of. It's a long building story with several events that will build/merge towards a larger story so for now, I am mainly setting up what's to come. I apologize if it came off confusing, I wanted to make it seem like a natural episode where it jumped focus from different characters too. Hopefully with the upcoming chapters it will make more sense. Appreciate your comment immeasurably!
Seeing the latest scene between Hopeful and Applejack (with a bit of Bloom on the sidelines), it makes me want for someone to literally knock Applejack some sense upside her stubborn hard head. It's so damn obvious that she's at least interested--why else would she continually brush him aside all the damn time?! She's really working on borrowed time--I'm sure that Hopeful has a limit and eventually he will find someone that won't rebuff him. Then what would you do then Applejack?
Also, this is a personal thing, and it still bugs me though proof and everything else goes to the contrary--there are times that I DESPISE that people go out of their way to show that Spike is a child. We get it--the writers don't want to have stuff like that because if would bog down the story or have issues that can't exactly be hand-waved away even with all the shiptease that shows up. And I know that there are a lot of fanfiction writers that will never ship Spike with any of them mane 6 because of their own opinion of ship. I get it, everyone has an opinion, like assholes. Doesn't mean I have to like it. I just simply don't like having the 'child' label on Spike especially when it shows his thought process is that of a young adult. Seems like everypony still see him as a kid because he's short. Just keep rubbing it in, Applejack--you eventually reap what you sow.
EDIT: (edited 1:02 pm EDT). Is it just me, or does this really is a chapter that I've already read on FanFiction.net some time ago? Everything is familiar: Applejack rebuffing Hopeful again, Applejack's conversation with Moonstruck, Arrowhead with RD, and Twilight's conflict between being ratting Moonstruck out and keeping her promise that she made with her friends because she has to report to Princess Celestia. I'm pretty sure that I've seen and read this weeks ago...
6460959 Actually, yes this is the same chapter you read on FF.net, I was reluctant to post further chapters on here because the upload process is an annoying hassle to go through, plus more people seemed to hate this story than on FF.net so I wasn't exactly eager to update here anytime soon. I do want to give an extra big thank you for commenting on this story and following it on both sites, it's really made an improvement in confidence seeing someone writing/talking about my story on both sites.
I also wanted to say I understand your feelings on how the writers (and lots of others) treat and view Spike, that's something that will play a lot in this story. The same goes with how Applejack has been. There is actually a reason why she avoids Hopeful and it's not the same reason she's been giving, though her stubbornness is definitely a contributing factor; look for that reason in Chapter 12. As far as Hopeful's "limit" and wanting to find some pony else *wink* you maaaaaaaaaay be closer than you think. Again, thanks for the amazing feedback and support, hope to update soon!
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You're welcome. I do like the story, and I can see that there is a bit of a compilation of different stories under one umbrella, so to speak. There is a lot going on, with all of the different characters, so at first glance, if could seem that it is a bit disorganized, especially when it seems that the main story is how Moonstruck is trying to prove his innocence, while at the same time showing that he's got a crush on his own jailer, so to speak, and at the same time, her friends and her 'son' have issues of their own accord with their own tastes of romance that is pretty much going nowhere. And ironically they pony that they have jailed--royal arrest, even, since Twilight's involved--know how to help each and every one of them with their love problems, whether he knows (Spike's issues with Rarity) or he just can sense them (Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight to a degree). But if you can sit down and actually read it (not skim over it), you can see that there is a pretty significant thread through all of them, and that thread is nowhere near ready to be unwindled....We still haven't even come close to seeing what Pinkie and Fluttershy really think about things, though it seems we may be treated to Pinkie's side soon.
The upvote/downvote ratio can be a little misleading at times....it's more that there aren't really many people other than me that are looking at the story, much less upvoting and downvoting it. Simply put the more people that actually see this story, the more that people can upvote and downvote your story. I don't get why more people check it out. I don't see it in a lot of groups, so there could be a issue. And I know that there are some user similar to me that look at FF.net as well as FIMFiction here. In fact, FF.net led me to FIMFiction, and that was going on three years previous. I was lurking on both before that.
Don't tell me discord's going to be evil as well.
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now thats out of the way. This is the best story i read i mean really i love it.
Welp! after reading this chapter I cant wait for the next one when is it coming
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It means a lot to hear you say that! I've worked really hard on this story and people seemed to be 50/50 on it so I thank and value everyone who is giving my story a chance.
So I happened upon this story while searching the recently updated section for something new to read, and many things about this story caught my eye. First, it is almost at 200,000 words, and it has a lovely title. Next, everything in its about box and then the full description had perfect spelling and grammar. Then I noticed how interesting the premise was. These are all things that point to something truly special. But then I noticed the like/dislike bar. So after briefly reading some reviews and having some major things spoiled, I came to the conclusion that you, dear author, are an experimental writer. I cannot wait to read this. I absolutely adore stories like this, but they almost don't exist on this platform. I will leave another comment after I read a few chapters to let you know what I think.
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I have to say, you probably gave one of the most thought provoking and interesting reviews on this site. It's funny because it popped up due to the fact I put up a new chapter but I've been having formatting issues so I took the chapter down because I needed time to fix the problem. I'm just lucky to hear someone took notice of it. Another funny thing is the fact you like the title. I have gone back and forth about changing the title because I wasn't sure it really fit, but nothing else I came up with seemed to work for it. I have admittedly felt discouraged about this site due to the like/dislike bar being so divisive. It's not that I can't take criticism, I guess I was just confused at how almost EVERY story I read or glanced at was always positive and the negatives were barely evident at all, and yet mine seemed to put so many off.
I admit, this is my first MLP story. I never thought of myself as an experimental author but now that you mention it, I kind of like the sound of it. I wasn't aware my approach to this story was so radically different compared to other stories on here, but after reading quite a few, I see how it can be seen that way. I greatly appreciate your flattering and supportive words and will continue to update this story despite my initial discouragement. You've inspired me!
8095860 Well, I'm very glad to hear it! My reasoning behind what I said was that you have gone for a very wide focus story, which are rare enough normally, but near impossible to find on this site. I've actually been writing my own novel based on this concept of not having a main character, but taken even further by not having any antagonists. Instead, there are somewhere around 30ish protagonists, who are all fighting for the same cause, but can't agree on the best way to get there. I like to think of it as a more realistic take on the typical fiction format. The way you have been writing this story has actually inspired me in a few ways, and I think I'm going to change a lot of the format from my original plan.
I know this might seem like a well, duh thing, but one thing I love about your story so far is that I have seen fewer than one spelling and/or grammar mistakes per chapter. There are a surprising few stories on this site that can claim the same.
I'm up to chapter 10 right now, and it feels like I have just finished the setup, and am about to get into the meat of the story. So far, lovely job. I can see why a lot of people were put off now though, and I think I was right in my initial assessment. It has to do with the wide focus. People on this site are used to one main character, and a supporting cast, or a small group of main characters. The "they are all main characters" concept is foreign to them. These are people who would not enjoy Lost or the Sopranos, and just feel, well, lost and confused.
I can not help think that Celestia as a ruler is better at ruling ponies from a distance while luna was better at ruling the ones close by. This idea leads me to believe that the horrible nature of the majority of ponies in Canterlot is due to Luna not being around for a 1000 years.
Yes he did, Rainbow.... and you blew it again, possibly for the final time.
Why do I get the feeling Spike and Rarity's relationship is going to be destroyed soon?
Called it.....
That's one more relationship in shambles due to stupid things said.
How many more chapters do you plan to write? Love this story!
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While I don't have a definitive number despite the fact I have the whole story's chain of events mapped out in my mind, rest assured, this story is still a long ways from being completed. I never planned on it being this long but seeing the responses to it, I'm glad that it is turning out this way. Thank you VERY much for being supportive and invested in my first MLP story. I'm half way done writing the next chapter as we speak!
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Awesome sauce
Awesome chapter!
Not trying to rush, but will part 2 be out soon?
Awesome chapter!
Ummm wasn't this after triak blew up the libary and twlight became a alicorn?
Well that's one way to eat Rarity's ass.
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Yes, but this is an alternate take on Season 5. Twilight restored the library instead of taking the castle. I started writing this story after season 4 ended, so I had no idea about the special locator map and created my own story without the castle since I didn't know what the creators were going to do in season 5.
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Ok but still why is she being called a unicorn?
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I don't see where I called Twilight a unicorn. Rarity, Sweetie Bell and Satrlight Glimmer are the unicorns I referred to.
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Hmm maybe i was reading this wrong at it was talking about moon
When's the next chapter coming?
Great to see new chapters! Good one
Awesome chapter
I knew u were gonna give some amazing scene with spike and rarity, like there whole u must feel hated towards me bit
When is the next chapter coming out?
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Right now!
If Rainbow Dash dies I'm going to resurrect Voldemort and Sauron and get them after you.
Jk. I hope she lives.
Great chapter.
One of your the best chapters! Great job and I hope this story gets updated more frequently:)
Great chapter.
Boy you certainly know how to milk a chapter.
Please update chapter soon!!!đ©
So.. There is no chance of Pinkie getting a love interest. I don't mind. I'm just wondering is all.. Cuz if you might consider that a possibility. I do have a oc you can use.
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Actually, in the chapter entitled "Heart Attack Part 1", I referenced that Pinkie's love interest is Cheese Sandwich and he WILL be showing up to make good on that snuggle time with her!
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Excellent. I am happy to hear that.
... Spike.. You are a bro! Defend your mares honor!
Whoa. I love the new Fluttershy.
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Heyoo!
!!! Twilight!! You liar!! You broke the agreement!!! It's like a breaking a Pinkie Promise! But not as bad.
Damn!!!! Fluttershy is such a savage!!!