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Bionic Slime


"Don't judge me by my failures, but only by my dreams."

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2ND PLACE WINNER OF STEADFASTHOOF'S SPARITY CONTEST!!! Special thanks to the extraordinarily talented CaioCoia for the the beautiful cover art!

Spike and Rarity have been together for some time now. He's grown into quite the mature dragon and Rarity finally realized her feelings for the purple drake. He's got a very special picnic/night planned for his lady, involving a very important question to ask...the most important of their lives.

*Heavily inspired by a scene from Tim Burton's (my favorite director!) classic film "Edward Scissorhands". This was made as an entry for Steadfast Hoof's "Sparity" contest for the Sparity Group. Merry Christmas to all!* *One Shot*

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Wow. It is so rare, for a romance to drive me to tears, but, lo and behold, I teared up several times. This has to be the most emotionally powerful love story I have ever read in my entire life. To whomever wrote this, thank you. It was beautiful.

Like how Daring Do goes by the name Aka Yearling?

A. K.

Fantastic story. Romantic without being mushy, endearing without being cheesy. Lover every minute of it!

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Dec 22nd, 2016

Haven't read a decent sparity story for some time now. Glad to see ppl still ship them.

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Dec 22nd, 2016

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That is a BEAUTIFUL song. I absolutely loved it, I feel like I just found my next favorite love song :heart:

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Feb 23rd, 2018

Beautiful story. Wish I could say more about it but it left me warm inside. Don't have found anything that would have been bad. All I can do now is fave it and look after your other stories you might have written.

Thank you for writing it. :twilightsmile:

Wow...

Comment posted by PegasusMesa deleted Feb 23rd, 2018

Well, author, I have read this story thine, and there are a few areas where you could improve some. Would you care for my thoughts in their entirety?

Loved it.

Excellent story. Keep doing what you do best!

Brilliant story. Wonderfully written and powerfully presented with a great deal of humour and sincerity exactly where it is needed. I loved it from start to finish, as I do with every Sparity story out there. This only makes me want to read Strange Yet Wonderful even more.

Rarity's… 'boldness' surprised me here, and in a good way. Thanks for writing! :twilightsmile:

This still gets me a'smilin:pinkiehappy:

Oh my good golly gracious. This has to be the sweetest and the best written Sparity fanfiction I've ever read. My gosh. :heart: It's beautiful.

You are the kindest, sweetest, most generous soul I have had the pleasure of befriending.

... somehow, somewhere, Fluttershy started to tear up...

On a more serious note: This story was... hm. 'Great' doesn't really fit the bill. Heart-warming. I admit, when your tale reached its climax, I had to blink a few times myself to keep on reading. Stories like these make it harder to believe that romance might be dead or that this world has barely enough beauty to offer.
Thank you so much. :twilightsmile:

This is the sweetest, and most romantic Sparity story I have read yet!

I’m so glad that you made it, because otherwise, I would never have been able to take the time to read this wonderful one-shot. To boot, there’s even some slight humor and emotion-wracking moments to back it all up.

I extended my arm to my lady to invite her on a stroll around the park. She giggled at my chivalry and happily accepted. She breathed in my scent and cooed endearingly. And as always, her voice sounded like the most sublime music to my ears. Having a girlfriend who walks on all fours makes holding hands challenging. But luckily, one of my wings works just as well. I extended a wing over her side and sweetly cuddled closer to her. Her voice purred; no doubt from feeling her body wrap around mine comfortingly. Dragons are naturally toasty, thanks to our fire breathing.

Can you please get someone to make a picture of Rarity and Spike cuddling close to one another? Rarity holding Spike’s claw with her hoof, and Spike using his wing to have her close to him?

“I know that put’s a strain on our time together my love,” she continued to hold my claw as we walked. “Business has been booming as they say. I can’t seem to keep the shelves stocked fast enough! Which is good, but as you said,” she curled her purple tail with mine, “momma needs her dragon to snuggle with.”

Can there also be one of Rarity wrapping her tail around Spike’s?

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