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PaisleyPerson


HENLO. That is all.

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Loved this story, although I find it a bit odd that you chose Garble of all dragons. I can see the similarity in their color palette, just as Spike is kind of similar to Twil'y, but it just strikes me as off that you chose Garble, who is a drake to be Sunset Shimmer's assistant, rather than a wyrm type of dragon, which is what Spike is (Wingless dragon with access to magic as compensation.).

Good, emotional story though, and it earns my like and favorite. :moustache:

5758180 Sunset probably did have a Wrym at first, but it was taken away and Gqrble as the only one left, although he is a Drake instead.

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I don't see what dragon species has to do with anything. Really, Garble is the perfect choice, not just because of color scheme, but mainly because of his peculiar antipathy toward ponies. I find the premise to be both believable and interesting.

Why does Garble not have his own tag?

I wish the show did more with Garble. He has so much potential in my opinion. Maybe he could befriend spike in later seasons.

NGL this made me tear up a bit. :fluttercry:

“Whoa!” She quite literally jumped, hopping a few times to make sure she could still feel her body although she could no longer see it. “Creepy,” she poked her arm to be sure it was there, “but effective.”

Ohh that kind of reminds me of the Harry Potter when Harry use the invisible clock to get into the library very clever

“Sunset appeared particularly interested in this portal,” the librarian pointed to an image on the page. It was a perfect rendering of the mirror before him. “The portal only opens once every thirty moons. The night she vanished happened to be the day the portal was activated.”

Oh shoot she went to the human world AKA Equestria Girls

Wow what a story and I probably would treat this as an alternate universe but I do love the idea of Sunset and Garble would have history with each other even becoming friends but unfortunately their friendship have become broken after what Sunset did to him and he never forgotten that after all those years even when Sunset did return he was still mad at her for what she did to him and what she said it was a Bittersweet story but it was good keep up the good work

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