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Cerulean Voice


Father of twin 8yo boys, partner of Arcelia, and so glad to remain here.

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Princess Celestia has put out a reward for anypony willing to venture into the Everfree Forest in order to acquire some incredibly rare—but dangerous—creatures, for the purposes of research and education. Cratus is the only pony willing to answer the call; after all, he's dealt with dangerous and rare creatures his entire life.

But there is another pony who might prove useful to him, and his cause. He's heard tell of her affinity for wild creatures: specifically, her unparalleled ability to keep them calm.

Never did he anticipate the impact that convincing her to join him would have on either of their lives.


Pre-read by NightWolf289, PaulAsaran, SirTruffles, Majin Syeekoh, Foals Errand, Magello, and Themaskedferret.

Cover art by Magello.

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Chapters (2)
Comments ( 25 )

Two of each kind, huh? Looks like someone's building an Ark.

Anyway, nice start. Mythic Chains is a helluva sweet name. I get the impression the prologue is one of those things were the reader is dropped off the middle of the story, and then everything comes full circle later. I'm curious enough to read more if you wrote more.

I'll be following this. It looks interesting.

This is a interesting story so far; especially with a pony that has not much story time. I think your on to something and I like to see it continue.

Yes this is a great intro to what looks to be an amazing tale but could you either finish or continue work on The Ultimate Rebellion ?

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I have actually been contemplating it, yes. I'll have to read through again to refresh my memory, and make some slight tweaks to what I already have first, but then I'll rustle up my team and hopefully make some progress. Might take a little time, but it'll happen! :twilightsmile:

he’s really (I mean, really) good with his chain.

Giggity.

Let the adventure begin.

I think this is the first story I've seen with Mythic Chains in it at all. Looks like we're off to a great start so far. :twilightsmile:

Holy crap, you actually wrote a story on this dude? Imma read it^^

EDIT: This is awesome! Though, I wonder what Celestia wants all these critters for?

this is nice and needs more chapters at your earliest convinience

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I've got some ideas. Just need the motivation now. :derpytongue2:
Thanks for the interest :twilightsmile:

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no need for the thanks

afterall its only natural that people flock to good stories, and by extention good authors

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As per my most recent blog post, I have modified the name Mythic Chains to Cratus instead, owing to new official canon courtesy of the MLP CCG. This does not change or alter the story in any way, but I felt the change was necessary, as I try to adhere to all sources of canon when possible. I hope you understand.

Very cool, and I'd love to see more.

I'm really intrigued by this Fluttershy we're seeing here. She's much more confident and self assured, but still shy and scared. It feels like she's grown from the one we know in the show, but not so much that we don't recognize her.

Cratus seems intriguing to, he's a good foil for her and also is willing to give her the leeway she needs, but also push her to grow and develop.

I half assumed this dead
good to be wrong

Glad to know that this one of a kind story didn't have a one and only chapter, though a tad... Delayed, I'm still glad this got updated

I very much enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait to see what more you can dish out. The only thing that really bothering me was Fluttershy's letter. When you write a letter you don't write 'umm...' and stuff like, but that's just me being nit picky

Hmmm, I wonder what the last item in the list could be. Always good to have a little bit of mystery in a story.

Also, Fluttershy be like,

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Hey, you. You're absolutely right about that 'um'. So I fixed it. :twilightsmile:
Glad you like it. I really do plan to keep this going.

Love this, Fluttershy is best pony!:yay:

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I think that's the spot for 'anything never-before-seen by pony eyes'.

Anyway, this story is ripe with potential.

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