I have no idea what happened or how I got here all that I do know is I'm in a world full of talking horses.
Ya I thought I was crazy to or dreaming, but then stuff happed some blue horse with a horn and wings is after me. Not only that the ones with horns have magic!. Well good thing I live in this forest then.
One thing that keeps bugging me is how these three little horses, how in Gork an' Mork name do they keep finding me!?.
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Interesting story
"An indispensable part of your artillery, brother of mine..."
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Not even out of the gate and you already really need an editor. I couldn't even get through the description before being made ill by how poorly written it was.
Dude... hahahaha!!!!!!! Nice!
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Their ORKSEZ!!! THEYZ DONT NEED NO STINKIN EDITA GUY! Say... Your Small, Pink And Squishy! ITS CHOPEN TIME BOYZ!!
6020936 thanks
6021063 it just a one shot it not like I'll be working on it any more then this, maybe if I get bored.
Dey'z keeps find ya cuz ya ain't wearin' no purplez. Purplez iz da sneakiest! Any grot knows dat.
6049113 lol
6049127
No, really, he's right. 4chan had a major, kinda famous discussion about what color makes an Ork stealthiest. It was decided that purple makes an Ork the sneakiest because no one has ever seen a purple Ork. Given how the WAAAGH!!! power in the Ork's psychic field works...don't let the Orks know.
6164993 I may use that if I ever come back to this.
Do more chapters waaagh
6576396 I'll think about it. XD
Ere we go Boyz!!!
WWWWWWAAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! SHOOTY! SMASHY! BOOMY!
6644015 lol thank you.
6644888
Your welcome man.
WWWWAAAAAGGGGHHHHH!!!!
6576445 I'd certainly read more of this! :D
6644888 Whe is the next chapter coming out?
6651849 When I start working on it.
Need some help keeping those orks off your back?
6732357 If only they was orks.
Please continue this, i need more WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!
6773111 I'll think about it.
6773111 Agreed, we need more. I don't even know anything about this game but I want more! Waaaaagh! *Uninspired Ork is uninspired.*
6856778 I'll think of something later, like I said I didn't plan on turning this into a full story.
uhhh bozz? ta boyz are getting roudey! we be runnan out of fights! WE EED MORE BOZZ!
7219490 Aw shut ay traps! We'z get to da fight when we'z good an ready!
7220317 But we need a good
orz we strt to duz thix
This looks funny I like it is there going to be a Waaagh!
7430034 All I can say is maybe.
7430040 YAY
10/10
Ok you have to go over this for editing, you have wrong words all over the place. I'm pretty sure he saw horses attacking him not houses.
7430243 thanks for pointing that out.
good 'ol Xenophobic Equestrians, You can always count on them to attack, or be racist towards, anything that is not a pony or the pony is too "different".
7430303 most people would hate or disapprove of that but damn if it ain't true.
7430319 that it is, and when you look closely when watching the show you can see it.
this makes me want to cry in joy i love orks
nothing could go wrong.....hmmmmmm.....it;d be a reeeeeeal dick move if something were to go horribly wrong right now........yep.....reeeeeeeeal dick move......
7431008 I'm just evil like that. XD
I was SO interested, until I found out this was a displaced story
From the title I thought it would be the Hulk, or Kermit the frogbarian.
more
7433137 in time
Ork trivia: "Orks produce and release spores as long as they are alive and when they die all accumulated spores are released" hope this helps whoever
Okay I read the part where he wakes up tomorrow, I just wanted to say one thing.
First, a nice and short Human world moment.
Now the story can be either good or bad. I personally prefer not to many Crossovers between him doing stuff for his own story without everything only being about a different person that isn't even from his story.
Then I just hope there is no bodyless Voicethat explains everything, and no displacer (displaced OP trainers or something like that, like a Crossover police or something.)
The only other thing I can think of is, him not telling them about the show.
I don't know what really is putting me of, I mean I like displaced storys, but the latest storys, always had a weird turn to me, and only some of the earliest (a OP Gilgamesh, some intentor guy, a....time stopper guy?, and one other guy or even girl, where good but didn't got another update.
The others have that annoying voice, "only" Crossovers, or have a good start, and suddenly it looks like it is M rating only and they kind of overdo it a bit.
poor tom
Nice start, I just hope the chapters are getting at least as long as this one.
While I already saw it was short, it really felt to short. Nice chapter, at least for what I have seen.
7441339 thanks