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Stardom Freedom


just kind of here, i guess.

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Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara are best friends, but Diamond is a bit bossy. Whenever Silver wants to do something, Diamond just makes plans to sabotage the Cutie Mark Crusaders, so Silver just goes along with it.

Deep down, it hurts Silver to see the blank-flanks so sad.

So, for a self birthday gift, Silver gives herself the one thing she ever wanted: a new her.

Thank you Nightglimmer22 for the amazing cover art! :pinkiehappy:

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Comments ( 7 )

This is great, it totally explains the cannon of Silver Spoon secretly being a nice pony, though i hope there will be more chapters.

More chapters!

Comment posted by friday13 deleted Mar 15th, 2015

Would have been nicer if you used the horizontal line or simply an --- to make us know that there was a transition or time skip, but other than that, it's a nice and simple fic. :3
Since this is a one-shot, don't forget to mark this as complete! :D

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There's not gonna be any more chapters, because this was a one-shot. But there will be a sequel!

This was a nice fic, but waaay too rushed. And Silver's sudden decision to just 'break up' her friendship with DT- one that has presumably been around for years- was very sloppy and poorly paced. And the CMC's reaction to just letting Silver hang with them seemed fake. It would have been much more in character for them to reject her a first, or at least seem skeptical. That way, Silver could learn that it takes a long time to earn trust, and that sorry doesn't fix everything.

So I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to put the thumbs down on this story. Better luck with your other fics. :twilightsmile:

If you knew you were going to make a sequel why wan't it just another chapter?

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