"Soon enough, the ride was over. They climbed out of the car, breathlessly laughing and stumbling. Wildfire’s head was swimming and her eyes couldn’t quite focus, but she didn’t care. She was too damn happy to care right now. ‘What’s more, Raid looks happier than I’ve seen her in a few days. Why, she has that look on her face when she’s just won a big race.’ Wildfire stumbled over her own hooves, but caught herself on Air Raid’s wing. Air Raid laughed a genuine laugh and held her marefriend with her wing, pulling her onto her hooves. Wildfire held onto the wing firmly, and blushed as she gazed into Air Raid’s grey eyes."

Just want to point out this paragraph is in there twice. Otherwise great work so far ^.^

6205566 ahem...so it is...ooops! i'll just go and um...sort that out

WHAT THE HELL WHY DID IT HAVE TO BE SCOOTALOO'S SYNDROME WHY. WHY WHOULD YOU INSULTE HER LIKE THAT!!!!! WHY I ASK YOU WHY?

Scootaloo's Syndrome...

This Blitzwing character doesn't seem too bright. "Hey let's bully a prince and his friends." No way that might turn out badly...

6205922 can scootaloo fly? no. should she be able to at her age? yes. have younger pegasi been shown flying? yes. have the creators made any attempt over five seasons to explain why she cant fly? no.

i haven't been insulting in any way. i have merely attempted to explain why an otherwise perfectly healthy pegasus is unable to fly. i am also suggesting that she's famous enough to have the condition named after her. also despite her condition Air Raid hasn't let it hold her back

6205981 Blitzwing isn't bright at all, he's a homophobic bully. yes his character is exaggerated to the Nth degree but he isn't meant to be a genius. plus he'd been drinking, and saw his favourite target and took his chance to inflict some bullying

6206018 dude no one knows why she can't fly everyones different.
would she let someone name a disorder after her. no. would she do something about it. yes.
to me that just is low man im done not reading this sorry ever again

6206040 Oh, I'm certainly not criticizing your writing of the character or anything. I'm just awaiting his inevitable misfortune with bated breath.

6206155 it will come, don't worry there

So. Many. References. Great work Dusk, as always darlin.

6212504 thanks Rosie, i'm really glad you liked the chapter

6216336 OMG good or OMG bad?

Again another awesome chapter and for the love of luna I hope that bastard blitz pays for what he did to raid and her lovely car! I will accept nothing less then the death penalty or being crushed by princess Lunas anger ^^

6216524 you shall have to wait and see. Chapter 2.4 coming up will be the end of part 2. something really big and life-changing happens. Wildfire & Blitzwing are involved. ends will be tied up, hopefully to everypony's satisfaction

Amazing chapter!!! The fight scene was great and overall everything was great. Also I liked the tea cup ride part

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you're the only reader so far to pick up on this Mistress. i did want to make it clear Air Raid had spent time to relax Wily on the cloud, that it did hurt like Tartarus at first, and she had to try again.

glad you like the story

As a car guy, what they did to Raid's TT killed me inside.

Why that.... I fracking hate bullies...

Scootaloo's Syndrome... While it's sad that she could never fly, she still became famous with her Scooter. And now I ship Wildfire and Air Raid more than ever. They're just so cute together!

Back on the ground the hulking form of Boudica emerged from the shadow of the closed food van where she’d been rummaging through the bins. The Diamond Dog couldn’t believe what she’d just overheard. ‘So the green pony can’t fly…’ She smiled an evil smile. How Blitzwing would reward her when he heard this.

Uh oh... It's bad enough what Blitz did to Raid's car, and nearly did to Dusk. I don't trust the guy and I have good reasons for it...