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Wow Another excellent chapter from an Excellent Author great chapter and Hopefully they find Wiley along with Darkstar making a speedy recovery
An awesome chapter. It makes me feel good seeing the progress Darkstar is making, and you really did your homework on the medicines there. I do hope that Wildfire is found, and that her captors end up behind bars or end up getting worse treatment than they did to her. Twisted sense of justice, I know, but I do wanna see it stay kind of dark with how they end up being punished. *cough* *cough* *execution* *cough*
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I don't wish to give too much away for the future, I will just say though is that Wildfire will be found in the epilogue, and that the sequel is due out next month, entitled "Releasing the Flame", where certain characters get what is due to them
Great chapter as always, bro.
6988506 thanks sis! Just the epilogue to go now
6988519 So excited!
6988453 Can't wait till then Milady This is gonna be great
I just binge read all 15 chapters in under 3 hours... I do not regret a minute of it.
6991837 wow, really? what did you like about it?
6991861 I like the character depth and relationships details. Also, I'm a sucker for a well-written tragedy about usually happy characters
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I have read many a type of fanfic on this here website over the past several years, some of them were good, some of them were bad, a small few I might even say were almost perfect. Though through all of it Dusk, very few have managed to do what you did in the above scene, and that is the fact that very few fics have managed to leave me feeling, hurt.
What I mean by this, is that it just about physically hurt having to watch Wild finally break; not just because she did, not even because after almost a year of being there, almost a year of constant torment and abuse, but because even now, as I write this, 2/3 of the way through Chapter 3 of Wildfire 2, I still find myself wondering "what if?", "what if Dark had been able to better inform Air Raid before she herself was drugged and almost killed?", because if that had happened, then there's a very good chance that Wild is saved before Amethyst can break her, and within a few months she is more-or-less back to where she was on the day that her destatoute, no-good sperm donor sold her to the Devil.
So my hat's off to you Dusk, you did an outstanding job writing this rather thrilling piece of fanfiction.