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Damn this story is awesome
5995163 thanks very much. may i ask what you like about it?
5995247 I love that it shows what a true hero is that even if they have a heart problem there still willing to put others lives ahead of there own an that it makes me feel for the characters when there sad and when there happy it's like I'm there with them an it has awesome sex in it ^^
5995967 thanks there will be more awesome sex in future chapters. in particular the next one is at a funfair. anything you'd like me to include in terms of kink?
why is this is the pet play group when it doesn't have that fetish listed?....
5996847 it will have, trust me
5996859 oh my bad i thought the fic was finished without looking....
5996998 long way to go yet my friend
Very interesting, i'd love to read more (btw, I read the story a few hours ago,just forgot to comment!)
5998350 thank you. hope you like the rest of the story
5995983 I do have a pee fetish but I don't think it would fit in the story well so just keep it the way it is unless you wanna try fitting it kn either way it's still an awesome story :)
5998778 so do i, pee is cool there is watersports in chapter 1.4 and there'll be more in 2.2
5998867 awesome <3 :D can't wait to read those chapters ;)
can't wait for the next chapter
I'm a terrible friend for just now getting to this. The bits you've added since I've read it last fit splendidly. Just the right amount of kink to. Great job Dusk.
6057696 Rosie please, as if you could ever be a terrible friend. you're awesome!
So much awkward...
... That is something I'd love to see.
A couple missing commas, a few capilization errors and you mentioned that Wily visits her mom on Tuesdays and Fridays. I think in the past few chapters you said Mondays and Thursdays? Either that or I'm going mad
Nineteen... Orgasms... Boy, that must've been some birthday deal for our protagonist. Still, not a bad birthday to have (Except for one minor detail) and she even gets to be on assignment again at the firefighter business. It was rather nice to pay a visit to someone her late colleague knows personally and once again she put together a rather nice poem. If she weren't already a firefighter, she'd make a killing doing the beatnik poetry deal. But then, before she can even enjoy her little 'surprise' that was set for her, of course we can see that duty calls. That's what she gets for wanting to get back to work as soon as she can. But hey, least she can go back to saving lives.