Sunset Shimmer finally had the guts to visit Equestria again. After having a quick chat with Twilight, they both decide to return to the human world together. Upon entering the portal, something goes wrong. They end up in an alternate human world where extreme street racing is the only way to make a name for oneself. The world is ruled by the Grand Champion, Torque, who will give any racer who defeats him rule over the world. Not surprisingly, everyone is racing for a chance to beat him. Twilight and Sunset Shimmer must find a way to gather their scattered friends and find out what the heck is going on. The thing is, Twilight and Sunset need to earn their respect first.
(comments can suggest characters for racers and what they drive)
Chapters (8)
Good, but you could do more explaining on what this 'Torque' looks like, rather than just calling him "a large man named Torque".
5720266 Don't worry, I will. If there is one thing I do, it's explain a person's look in detail.
I have to say, pretty interesting chapter to a new story! :D
5720973 Welcome back Doodle! Yup. I work on inspiration, and this was what my mind did in an hour or so. I'm still doing the other stories (got half a chapter on ACU and got a good start on a new Harmony's Creed chapter). I just wanted to do something NOT involving Assassin's Creed.
This music helped write it:
Also, if ya can think of who you want as a racer, (maybe even an OC) feel free!
Is Spike gonna be a dog in EVERY parallel universe!?
I really wouldn't mind seeing Rarity being a drifter in a supped up AE86. RD I can easily see driving an Eclispe.
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Yes. I just had the reasoning that since it changed them into humans, it would be the same across the board.
They could be in pretty expensive stuff. ( I won't guarantee a design cause A) multiple designs for one character and B) how it relates to where they are in the story). But I'll consider it.
Oh yes, drifting will be in this.
5723313 Sweet! Here's all I can think of for suggestions:
Main 6/7
Applejack - '70 Camaro SS
Fluttershy - Subaru WRX STI
Pinkie Pie - Dodge Viper
Rainbow Dash - Forget the Eclispe! A Lancer Evo IX is what I was thinking of!
Rarity - AE86
Sunset Shimmer - Mazda RX-7
Twilight Sparkle - Porche 911 Turbo S
Others
Torque - (if you already mentioned this guy's whip then ignore this one) Shelby GT500
5723364 Pinkie in a Viper? That's definitely a match.
Also, thanks for suggesting a ride for the main team. I was struggling a little there
Sorry, but Torque is off limits cause....reasons....
5723401 Understandable. And my original choice for Pinks was a Supra, but I chose the Viper instead.
5723405 Well, Viper it is. I'mma have fun with Pinkie in this.
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I just read this even though you messaged me it (dont kill me I still have to eat my sandvich) *1 lunch later* ah sandvich is most and delicious hahahah.
(What universe is this)
5725311 A universe. It is not a crossover, so it's one of my original creation.
Huh, I woulda figured Twilight would know what coffee is, since it was mentioned in Rarity Takes Manehatten (Suri: "Now get me some coffee!"). I think a more appropriate question would be:
"I wonder what coffee tastes like?" It could then lead to some... CRAZY shenanigans.
5726483 Brain: "Dolt! How did I forget that?"
Yeah....I guess that's better.
Would it be alright with you if I recreated the cars I picked? I could easily do it cause I have Need for Speed Carbon on my comp.
5733947 Until the cars are mentioned specifically, they are not set in stone. The cars in which they drive is not THAT important in the story (save for some...). So the choices you have listed are not in yet, save for the Mazda RX-7 (which is the car they found). So you can mess with your other choices all you like.
Epicness!
Dis gone be goooooood.
6022092 Oh where's that Spike gif?
Ah! There it is!
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Poor Thunderlane got smoked bein' a whole second-and-a-half behind second place.
6023892 At least he got the chicks.
Damn son you've attracted an auto-mania right here XD
6207372 Haha! That was the intent!
Also, I have not updated this story in a while, but that does not mean I'm not writing. It will be updated, I just don't know when.
6207522 You got a Facebook? I can invite you into a cars-and-ponies group! :D
6207527 I do, but I can't access it from where I am since I am not using my main computer (it's complicated and it's also some FB BS). So maybe sometime later. If you PM me the group, I may consider joining.
plz tell me you have a 69 dodge charger R\T planned for AppleJack
6216195 Heh, that would work. The readers can still vote for what car each character drives until they enter the story. So, Applejack could end up in that
6216195 I'm still rooting for the '70 Camero SS
6217523 Oh no! Decisions!!
Rarity would be good in a audi r8
6219657 Hmmm.....
Well, if any background ponies show up, I'd like to volunteer Vinyl Scratch and Octavia Melody for Bassline
6220733 Pfft! Is that an actual car or fictional? But either way, Pfft!
6220744 Yes, and Yes. Just because it wears enough speakers to make the pavement tremble doesn't mean it can't race. I imagine Vinyl is more into the sounds of the track than the actual winning anyway.
6220750 Just reading that and picturing it makes me both happy and laughing. If I can fit those two in here, I'll do that.
6219657 Any luxury car like Rolls or Bentley is suitable for Rars
6219657 Also, in the case of Rainbow Dash, she will have high performance cars like Nissan GT-R and Koenigsegg One:1
When's the next chapter!?
6498880 Not sure. I kinda forgot I even had this story....
Is it still open to suggest OC's for racers?
I have an OC I created and finalized the detail about them recently.
Edit: my OC's not as detailed as others, like PenStroke's Nyx, but it does have a bit of detail to it.
6612767 not sure about OCs. Most I make in this are either a reference of some kind or someone to fill in. Are the characters that will make an impact have already been mentioned or appeared already. So I guess if ya 2 ant an OC just to say it's yours, go ahead, give me the name and car.
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Well, her name's Qexzaqozal Gold (unusual spelling, I know. Just replace the q's with k's for the proper pronunciation), she's basically a scientist. I don't know a whole lot about cars, but when I imagine her with one, I can't see anything other than a suped-up, fully customized DeLorean.
If you don't want to use her, that's OK too.
6613715 Maybe I could fit her in a race. I mean, there are hundreds of them.
But I am working on other things at the moment, so the biggest thing to worry about is when I start updating this again.
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Thank you.
Was already excited to see this thing update when I found it, now I'm even more so.
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6964708 Yeah. That'll do it.
Why do I get the feeling that Fluttershy will be in a bug racing like in the Herby movies? So far I'm liking this story and has a lot of potential. You have another reader waiting for the next chapter in me.
6978177 Hehe.....no,
I rather have them have some actual chance.
This looks interesting, it's on my list.
Also, I may not have read it yet, but I'm always happy to see an author come back to a story after 7 months.