i write stories for my personal enjoyment as well as though who actually support me so if u don't like it don't read it
This story is about a pony who lives in equestria an alternate version of it anyway, where The Great and Powerful Trixie has taken complete control over everything. engulfed in complete chaos i have set up a personal mission to bring my time back to the way it was before it cease to exist forever......
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5703953 While it is probably a self-insert, the author could just be writing in first person.
5703964 True, but not all OC's are directly based off of the person who made them. Mine takes only my basic qualities and changes them. For example Thunder is braver, smarter, stronger, more helpful then me. But he also gets angrier and is prone to angry fits more than me. I tried to make Thunder more of what I want myself to be, more than what I am.
5703995 Yeah... I guess I didn't pull that off the way I wanted to. Just a couple of things wrong with what you said.
1.) I'm not bullied, at least not what I consider bullying. I made Thunder the way he is so he could help people better than I ever could.
2.) He never was an Alicorn, at that point he was a Draconicorn, a Unicorn with specific Draconic powers, such as flight, harder skin, and breath weapon. At this point though, he's a pegasus, I just haven't changed my profile pic yet.
But yeah, I suppose it is a self-insert. I don't fully consider it such since Thunder isn't me at all.
Wow...
Serious capitalization and punctuation errors here, and you need to break up the paragraphs.
Also, stopping to tell us, in parenthesis, that Trixie is a tyrant was a bad idea. Show us that she' a tyrant now.
You should read the Elements of Style. There is no better book for a writer, especially an inexperienced one.
ill get to the errors when i can but hey if u don't like the story don't read it you don't have to read it anyway im doing the best i can here so give me time
5704850 How will we know if we like the story or not if we don't read it first? It being your first fic doesn't excuse the poor spelling or grammar. I strongly suggest an editor and a proofreader.
Don't like don't read...eww. Just had a flashback to an unmarked mpreg fic.