The Potion

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Azure Blackstone

Azure Blackstone #1 · Mar 11th, 2015 · 8 · ·

I notice you didn't really delve into the sensations too much and the thing was over a bit too quickly, which is kind of a let down. Grammar needs a bit of work too.

Philosophysics

Philosophysics #2 · Mar 13th, 2015 · 5 · 1 ·

THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL!

Emtu

Emtu #3 · Oct 18th, 2015 · · ·

Aw, I for one would like to see more of this. It does feel a bit short and rushed, too.

Also, seconding the sentiment that it could use some editing.

BlueBlitz15

BlueBlitz15 #4 · Oct 18th, 2015 · 4 · ·

I would like to see more detail in a possible sequal.

Nectarine

Nectarine #5 · Oct 18th, 2015 · 3 · ·

This was pretty good, and I'd like to see where this goes.

Lord Of Dorkness

Lord Of Dorkness #6 · Oct 18th, 2015 · 2 · ·

I agree with what the other's have already said.

A bit rushed and seems to end on a weird note, but a really neat concept.

I do hope you either continue, or expand this later. A gender-bender is a big enough mess to find yourself in, but with your girlfriend fused with you? That's just a recipe for ~~hilarity~~ disaster.

Twiggy Vampony

Twiggy Vampony #7 · Oct 19th, 2015 · 2 · ·

A very good read even though it had its flaws i still loved it.
Definetly needs a sequel or another chapter. This is a very interesting idea and you should continue this. :3 if you want ofcourse ^^

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