'The story so far: In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move'- Douglas Adams, The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
All was going well, until she woke up.
Luna wakes up, only to find that she's back on the moon. She can't remember how or why she got here, she can only hope and wish that she can go home, where she belongs. To Canterlot with her sister.
But sometimes, wishing isn't enough...
My first Luna fic! I hope you enjoyed it, feel free to tell me any improvements :D Also, cover art is made by me on ms paint.
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This is adorable in some parts and also sad! I LURVE IT
5681328 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed and that it was actually sad :)
Oh goodness that broke my heart!
Poor Luna :(
Nice - added to Sad Luna.
5685039 thanks
This was... pretty okay. You at least have a decent writing style and fair conventions. However, I feel like this story is just forcing me to be sad, instead of letting my emotions speak for themselves. Also, this may just be a nitpick here, but when I read Princess Luna's dialogue... I did not read it as her. But, that could still just be me being weird. Overall, your story isn't that bad.
P.S. Nice attempt at the cover art. Not too bad.
5996274 thanks for reading
yeah, I do kinda agree with you on that, this was written a couple of months ago and definitely isn't my best work 
Thanks, I'm not too good with ms paint
5996285 Heh, that's okay. But, I'm sure I may see at least a subtle difference at one of your newer stories, "Ascending".
5996291 I hope so
I think I'm better at writing longer multi chapter stories than one-shots personally