All Soarin needed was a rest. A nice quite relaxing break in an interesting place.
Well it's certainly interesting to say the least. However, a town packed with crazy ponies is not what he asked for.
All was going well until Monday morning at precisely 10:16am.
Now there's a storm on the horizon and only he and a certain mare can stop it.
And what's with these weird ponies following him?
So much for a relaxing holiday...
Hope you enjoy! Any points for improvement are helpful so thanks! :D
Chapters (5)
I'm definitely interested
Dawning Dusk
hope to see more from you soon!
5605009
Glad to see you're enjoying it so far!
I honestly don't see anything wrong with this story, I guess the dislikes are from ship haters or trolls.
5609780 Thanks.
That's what I thought since they haven't commented as to why they disliked it.
This was awesome and i hope you DONT give up on this story... like most authors do...
it's pretty good!
5616623 Thanks a lot
I've started on chapter 2 already 
Love it! Always on the lookout for a good Soarin Dash story. Following and favourting! Right now I have to go for my tea. Keep up the good work!
Thanks!
I'm glad you are enjoying it. Yeah, soarindash is my favourite ship. 
yes!!!!!!
cant wait for moar!!!!!
I really like this! I spotted no mistakes cuz I was hooked! I shall wait patiently for the next chapter!
Thanks! I somehow wrote this in four days. Not sure how that happened
YES!
more soarindash!!!!!!!!!!
Soarindash related will hopefully be next chapter
Ooookay, now I really wanna know who are Night and Dust. Can't wait for the next chapter, though.
A little suggestion from me : I think maybe you should italicize sentences which are Soarin's thinking. It'll be easier for understanding.
5684236 thanks for reading!
Yeah, I was thinking about having thoughts in italic but I didn't want to break two much in the story because sometimes it's between speech and I didn't want to overuse it. Might still do it though. Thanks for the suggestion!
5684257 I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
random mistake I found
also, you have me interested
yay, the soarindash is starting, I think I'll like this and track
5684339 Yes, more soarindash should hopefully be next chapter, or the chapter after that if I need to split it. Thanks for telling me the mistake, I'll change that now
5684365 do you have schedule for updates?
5684369 I don't have a schedule but would like to post a chapter a week. The next chapter is at about 800 words so far.
5684376 okay, I read one of your other two stories, if the last one is good I'll follow you
5684379 thanks for reading!
5684382 your welcome
What did you make Surprise like pinkie pies distant cousin or something?
Anyways good story so far.. I'm intrigued
5686222 Pretty much distant cousins. Thanks for reading!
5688132 I'm the same age as you! :D!
5697774 Yay!
Thanks for reading!
5697805 haven't read yet, it's on read later but don't worry! it shall be read!
8,000 words exactly? How on earth did I manage that?
Omigoshomigoshomigoshomigoshomigosh! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Can't wait for the next!
Btw, I think I might have found a mistake, I might be wrong but :
He made his way out of the room and outside, where he went to the market place, in the centre of town.
Is the comma needed after place? Just wondering, I'm probly wrong but...
I really like this chapter
5707548 thanks for reading!
Yeah, that comma was an iffy one. I could probably get away without it, but in the centre of town' is extra information, I think, so the comma would go there... I think it could be either way. Thanks for pointing it out!
5707556 expect more soarindash in the next chapter
Thanks for reading!
Yeah, italics for thought is easier. YAY UPDATEZ!
5852642 okay, I will go and change that in the rest of the chapters at some point
thanks for reading
5852653 C5 has the same amount of words as three
5852654 didn't notice that
finally an update i know i read this late but i thought you wouldn't continue so i stopped checking if there was an update sorry
but now it's here an update and this chapter is awesome 
5868345 glad you enjoyed it
yeah, sorry about that. It was meant to be on hiatus for a shorter amount of time, but chapter 5 took longer than I thought, and I had to completely outline it.
*grabs you in the collar* WHEN'S THE UPDATE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
5904384
hopefully sometime this weekend or early next week. Can't promise anything though, I have to write an English essay and learn German orals. But sometime soon 
5904391 Welp, time to play Monopoly Millionares
5904402 have fun!
Love this story so far!!!
6020131 thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it
What made you decide to stop writing this story?
8161288 it's not that I stopped, it's that I haven't continued
a mixture of things really if I'm honest, school, started having a bit of a bad time in life after a while and I realised my original plan I had for the story would have to be altered a lot so a) it wasn't too similar to another story I had read and b) to avoid a few large plot holes I'd missed out at the time 
And my writing style has changed quite a bit since then, I'd have to probably rewrite parts of the chapters nowadays