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FaelaArts


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Luna stepped carefully through the underbrush, torch lighting the way as she used her magic to keep it lit despite the torrential downpour. Her fur was soaking wet, even the parts protected by her cloak. But she did not care. Luna had bigger worries than the rain.

For she was alone.

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Feels like I came in just at the end of the story. No real idea what has happened.

This was a neat exercise in ambiguity, and it makes me really curious about what came before. It's written well and the dark elements are really intriguing. And I dunno, I think the lack of context is neat and makes the impact of the sad moments more powerful.

5792874 Thank you, it was an experiment in telling a story without actually telling it.

OK, let me try to guess what happened here. Equestria's sun went nova (Bad Celestia! No cake for you!) and Luna managed to eclipse it in a failed attempt to save Equestria. Having decided there was nothing left to save and that she was only delaying the inevitable, she withdrew her moon--and died.
Yep. That's pretty sad.

RIP Celestia, She wrote letters and died in the most unpitiable way possible, and I say that sincerely because there's barely any story here. :ajbemused:

Well fuck.

Man... after finishing Life is Strange, this was the last thing I needed to read.

Good show, man.

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