While exploring Canterlot Castle, Pinkie and Rainbow Dash uncover a room filled with stone tablets connected to dials. Above each dial is the name of an alicorn. These couldn't possibly control an alicorn's power, could they?
After accidentally learning that each Princess has their very own secret rooms to retreat inside whenever they wish, Twilight Sparkle makes it her mission to uncover just what could be inside Princess Celestia's.
LuckyStar doesn't know who she is, aside that she was found as a filly close to death in a forest near Trotson. Now she must find a way to learn of her past, even if she has to travel across Equestria to do so.
It was certainly... interesting. I would like to say that I did not care for the story itself because it makes my favorite pony seems insane and silly, however your writing style is quite lovely and I would be happy to read more if there is ever any more.
603858 Thank you very much for the feedback. This story was kind of rushed and thus was sloppy, especially at the end. I will have more time to write during the summer, so hopefully my stories that are uploaded then will be of a higher caliber.
What a story, Mark!
It was certainly... interesting. I would like to say that I did not care for the story itself because it makes my favorite pony seems insane and silly, however your writing style is quite lovely and I would be happy to read more if there is ever any more.
Overlove - Dio
RIP Ronnie James Dio, 7/10/42 - 5/16/10
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Novelty accounts? On MY FiMFiction?
What is this madness.
Um...yeah... Unique writing style - very redundant, but that doesn't really matter...I guess...
That was a great mini fic!
Not to involved but to the benefit of the reader! if things get to involved then they get strung out and complicated. This was the perfect amount!
Now, taking a basic story line and adding a story board to it could make this fiasco so much more amusing and have a greater impact on the community!
Make ponyfics and they will come... just keep wetting the appetite and don't forget them.
Cant wait for more.
~~dezi94
I want more of this greatness!
'Tektiger to be first Equestrian Astronaut'
*reads article*
Capsule will orbit for 6 months. Only food supply is... PICKLES?!?
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It was a strange night of reddit when I realized "Hey, this would worth a few shits and giggles."
And here we are.
this is the greatest, hillarious and funny stor i have ever read. i tip my hat to you for your genious.
603858 Thank you very much for the feedback. This story was kind of rushed and thus was sloppy, especially at the end. I will have more time to write during the summer, so hopefully my stories that are uploaded then will be of a higher caliber.