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Windlife
We must dare, and dare again, and go on daring.
Windlife
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>story posted
>2 downvotes
Wow, some people can't appreciate artistic talent when they see it.
5624990
>4chin arrows
stop tainting this amazing story with your memes
5625587
Is that...
Is that my caption on your picture?
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Background pony is disappoint.
5625773
pls no copyright strike
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it seems like people just think its bad becuase its by me. i dont like how people dont use their brains to think for themselves
5625587
why dont u stop being a asshole to him?
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I don't see where you got the bad reputation from. Everywhere I see you, you are supportive and nice and other people are so mean to you. I am amazed at how strong you are for the sake of us, your readers.
I know you said don't talk about it outside of PM, but I think others should know what you have to go through. I don't care if the haters see this and try to downplay your amazing gift, you deserve better treatment from us and those who will listen need to know.
I'm sorry, but this is important to me. I hope you understand why I had to say this.
Okay, I know you have fun with this whole "writing" thing, I know. But...
...please...
...for the LOVE of ponykind!...
...Stop making stories! NOBODY likes them! Not one! ( Well, besides Obama Invades Equestria, but that was a troll-fic. It was meant to be bad, but in a good way. This isn't, it's just... not....)
...
...
...He's not going to stop making stories, is he? He's just going to delete this comment, right? You know what?
I know you're kind, just please.. stop writing. Learn, get inspired if you have to. Idk, just... ugh... I tried so hard not to sound like an asshole, guess that didn't work.
If it helps, I gave this an upvote purely because I've seen you in other comments sections and you've been nothing but civil and helpful, the nature of your stories notwithstanding in this case. Having said that, I'll take a look but forgive me if I give the trollfic a miss.
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you are very rude
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thnak u for saying that i am very helpful and want to help people now. if i can help others that means i am doing well.
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all anyone ever says is that! why is it bad!? no one ever tell me...
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Okay, I'll just say it here without the "Fuck you I'm gonna be an asshole so like it" side of me.
You're story's are:
1: Cliche "Nobody likes a cliche story, it makes the reader think he or she is just reading the same story over again."
2: Grammatically flawed "You can already tell, since you've posted in need of an editor."
3: Way too rushed "When a story is rushed, nobody likes it. Take your time to write a story, because while it may seem your writing took a long time, it will only take someone 4 minutes to finish reading it."
I'd add more reasons, but my fingers hurt already.
But listen, if you want to improve on both your stories, and your grammar, get some help. Proofreader, editor, whatever you need.
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i think my story has good grammer
5631342
"I"
"Grammar"
And on your recent comments,
"why dont u stop being a asshole to him?"
"Why"
"don't"
"you"
"an"
"it seems like people just think its bad becuase its by me. i dont like how people dont use their brains to think for themselves"
"It
"it's"
"because"
"don't"
"don't again"
5631349
but that is from my comments . it dont matter how i speak her it is not the story
5631350
"ass, well,"
ass. Well,
"occasions"
occasion's
Okay, I'm not going to make an hour long grammar comment over one story. In short:
Get a proofreader
Not many people like self-inserted OC's.
Get an editor.
Get inspiration to write non-cliche thing's.
That is all.
5631360
what is a chilche?
5631376
"a phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original thought." Meaning that this story has an idea that many of other people use constantly. Human goes to Equestria through some random shenanigan, been there, done that. Teams up with his self-inserted OC, waaaay overdone and constantly hated upon the Brony community.
5631383
but my OC has never been done beofre
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It doesn't particularly mean YOUR OC, it means people make there own OC constantly and self-insert them. (Meaning they randomly appear in Equestria.) Having your own OC doesn't make it original, just overdone in a different way.
Man why the fuck you still posting stories? Since your first one you have been doing shit, and you do ANYTHING to change that. Really, is funny to see how a human can be so stupid and make the same mistakes again and again! And I don't mean that just for you, I mean that for a lot of writers who don't put at least 1% of effort in their stories. Just... Try to be better or stop, please. We don't need shit here.
5632549
im trying my best! no one ever helps me!! i want to keep writing stories because it makes me feel good.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dK1JATU1LX4
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5663199
My editor has told me to talk to you with respect. I will.
Can you please take down that video? It not only hurts my feelings, but it's really rude and selfish of you. If you don't take it down, I'm afraid I'll have to take action against the video.
Sorry for telling you the bad news. You do talk well, but it's rude and awful that you make fun of my work.
5668119
go for it
5668127
I plan on it. My editor said that I can talk to youtube and get them to take it down over copyright.
5668127
you might think im a troll, but at least im not a rude asshole like you.
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5668144
I wish you and your editor luck with that.
and I thank you in advance for giving me so much material for my videos!
5668153
are you dumb in the head or something? if someone doesnt want there work up on youtube, they can claim copyright. Take your shitty video down before I even call the fimfiction admins.
5668153 Hey there! I just happen to have signed up to be an editor for Windlife over here. Now, can we all just be civil and have you take down the video, please?
Roarin Thunder go troll someone else, okay?
5668119 Wow, so you can write with perfect grammar! I'm surprised, considering most of your other comments look like, well...
5626668
That. On a side note, this story was actually pretty amusing. It plays out a lot like a parody of creepypastas, complete with enough creepypasta clichés to make an entire drinking game. Although it didn't work as a dark story (which, let's be perfectly frank, we all knew it wouldn't), from a comedic standpoint, this was actually pretty funny in an ironic sort of way. Time to let MichaelLeroi know about this, on the double!
5668238 Hello, Mr. Editor. I have a question: did you edit this story for him, or did you come on after this was already written?
Anyway, now that that's taken care of, I take my leave. Next stop, Youtube! Cheers
5633334 I know how you feel man trust me.
5632549 I really shouldn't be butting in but he has every right to publish stories on here like every other person on here. Bad or not changes nothing.
Watching the rest of the comments section not realize you're trolling is amusing. Keep doing what you're doing, Windlife.
This is the best story I've ever read
Did you find that editor that you were looking for a while back?
I'm late to the party, but
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do you think harassment is funny? i dont think so.
if you want to spread your hate please go somewhere else but here
6961805
Hm. You're right, and I apologize for my actions. I just took all of this for face value, is all.
6961813
this is what happens when i try to make a story but dumb haters bring it down with lies!
Holy crap. This has to be a trollfic. Nobody can purposefully write something this cringey without being a troll.
6979433
another hater.
just go back under your bridge will you? and dont come back or i will block and delete you
6985675 "Hating" would be calling you names or swearing. I think you're just overreacting.
5633334
Now, when you say
what I hear is
"Nobody ever upvotes me!!"
Because I've looked at quite a few of your stories, and from what I saw, not a single one was without at least one comment telling you what you did wrong. And for the love of god please tell us if you're trolling, because I've just about reached my limit in terms of believing that you're writing these comments (or deleting them) seriously