For as long as everypony can remember, Blueblood is a jerk. But one day, something between two beings changes everything.
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I don´t wan to be mean, but this was probably the first chapter that was nearly perfect for me.
However, i have to ask, even if his Body is used to do something else, why seems it to be like he could not control it at all?
I can´t think of one reason, that could actually prevent him, from doing what he want, beside the probably natural arousal, but i am not sure if that would not have to do something with his own mind, and that would mean, that he would experienced his special moment, like he usualy would do it.
I just mean, why it looks, like Prince Blueblood would try to take control over him, and start to act against his will. I don´t know if it works like that, but i think his own mind, and his own habits, should help him somehow to be a bit more like himself.
Would a Body change, really make him to feel his arousal, the same way Blueblood would feel it?
Redheart…is pregnant? I know that in the pass the king had manage to get a lot of woman pregnant and don't get any punishment for that, if game of thrones is any idea but the same goes her? did Red hearth really want a child and is willing to raise it alone, as a momentum of the stallion she loved? she is so devoted that she want a memory of him so badly?
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For a moment I fear that what happen was that the 'actual' blue blood somehow manage to return and wanted his body back
5874320 yeah, i didn´t wanted to say it, but it actually looked that way at some point.
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Now that i think about it, Readheart really changed in this short time, i don´t know if it was even a bit to much, i can´t concentrate much right now.
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Je a week and he got lay and impregnated a mare, plush ven with his reputation mares keep throwing themselves at him, Mark definitely forgot to turn off his swag.
I just Red Heart is ok and will be happy with her baby, maybe she doesn't mind raising it by herself as long as Blueblood doesn't change and she has that memory of their time together, plush I'm pretty sure the hospital will help her out in any way possible.
Jejeje I hope is a boy, because then Blueblood can give him 'Blues Love' or maybe 'Purple Heart' if it is a filly
Wow......god dang.
Nice work......But slow down the pacing yo -_-
An interesting story idea. Though the romance was rushed like crazy, and the conflicts were settled surprisingly quickly, I find this story worth the read.
Honestly, I was thinking of trying to write a "Human in Bluebloods body" in the future, but I could never get the damn motivation to do it. It's nice to see someone else write it, though.
Hope to see more soon.
Hooray and huzzah an update! Sad about him leaving Redheart but curious as to what or who he'll do in Canterlot.
5874399 Well okay yeah, we talked about it already, and even if Read Heart changed really fast, from hating him, to love him nearly out of nowhere if i remember it right, i accept the last scene without a problem. I mean i could think that this really could happen to someone this way, i mean that she wants a child to remember him.
It was a bit odd, that it looked like some other girls wouldn´t know him, but maybe they never really saw him or something like that.
To be honest i still thought more pony would probably hate him,, he didn´t got that much hate from other ponys right?
It could happen that i forgot something, so i don´t claim that i am right in my opinion.
Whatever, i maybe complain about him a bit, but i still enjoy the story in a way, it is not to bad.
5875428 I am curious if he would dissolve his harem, and shock his Mares with that.
I mean, if he really likes Readheart, then it would be something that i would like to happen.
It is probably another way to helo him, to change his past i guess.
Love it...
Poor guy is probably going to deal with Canterlot politics for a week and run away to Ponyville.
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Don't sweat it, the author has everything pland and will explain what is going on when its time come
Anyone else feel confused when the character is only called "the prince"?
I mean, I wasn't even sure if the first part was a flashback, since it seemed to fit what Celestia said about how Blueblood used to be and he and Redheart appeared to be somewhat happy. But then, I sincerely doubt we'll get to see much positive about real!Blueblood.
It's simply too convenient to make him a cheap, one-dimensional hate sink.
I'm going to make a prediction that Mark is going to become an alicorn sometime in this story.
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I surely hope so... They could probably use the damn help.