For as long as everypony can remember, Blueblood is a jerk. But one day, something between two beings changes everything.
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OK, he wasn't mad enough. he was just seduced by the wife of his new friend as a test from the leading monarchy and that's all he had to say?
It would have made since if he just left them the cold shoulder and kept his silence from them for a week at least.
It was kinda like someone spitting on your pride and you just letting it go.
Sure he may not do much to a couple of goddesses, but if he kept his distance from them, that's at least something.
I really loving the story so far
Perhaps you should consider adding breaks between different speakers. If you don't, things get very confusing. Like here:
That implies it's Fleur who's speaking. Remember, new line with every speaker makes things much easier on your audience!
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Yeah, kinda. I mean, sometimes he's treated like a horrible rapist monster, sometimes like a misbehaving boy, but all throughout they're acting kinda terrible themselves with nopony calling them out on it. Mayhap the original Blueblood turned out the way he was simply because his 'lovely' aunties kept putting him in these stupid situations?
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They still need to answer for leaving him alone with a lot of horny mares that don't appear to know the world 'no' he got traumatised for that, for god sake!
All little things aside, it was a really good chapter, and I'm glad to see you again dude, can't wait to hear more of you
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I wouldn't be surprised if they thought it a good idea for scaring him away from sex for good. Apparently Old Blueblood liked to sleep around a lot.
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Oh he is so getting back at them, but make you wonder, if that was a test, how frequently do the princess are being flirt at, or had to endure bad flirts?
This was good. Hope your all right bro, and having a good life :)
He reacted a bit more...controlled...with Luna and Celestia than I would have.
damnit
i hate it when authors devise a scene where the protagonist gets tricked in a dickish way and s/he rub instantly FORGIVES them or just lets it go as if it barely mattered
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I haven't said that he had forgiven them.
Haven't you had a day when you're trying to say something or do something important to you, yet it looks like if the world were against you? How do you react?
1) Start punching everything blindly?
2) Start to mourn about how cruel is life?
3) Get over with it and keep going?
6272909 I'd go with option 4.
Act nice but at the same time, cold.
Be all warm and nice to others but be polite but frosty with them.
I mean seriously, they hate the old blueblood but are trying to have others flirt with him to prove the new one was the old one instead
Didnt they already test him before?
I find it dickish that the first thing they thought to do was test him some more... In a more dangerous way!
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fume then go on
but hold a grudge until then