For as long as everypony can remember, Blueblood is a jerk. But one day, something between two beings changes everything.
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And the Prince ads another mare to his Harem. Please do not name the filly Nightmare Moon Nix.
" Prince blueblood, are the rumors true that you have finally crossed the line and has started sleeping with unmarked fillies."
" Prince blueblood is it true that you have finally accepted one of the thousands of illegitimate children as your own because she's an alicorn?"
You should get ill more often,this chapter's great! Looking forward to more!
Just a thought, did NMM seem a little tsun-tsun there? And is she now a loli?!
Lets see…Nightmare Moon came from Luna mind, and was 'purified' by Mark will, and compassion giving her a new body and a new start…does that means that…This new filly is Carelum, Luna and Celestia baby? did the 3 of them somehow just make a mental baby?
Oh boy the press is going to get nuts! for this…well its time to pull out the old 'a new alicorn niece has being discover…this one from Luna side of the family…yeah that sounds about right.
P.S: Mark NOW deserve his wings…Celestia and Luna? (after being choosen by the stars) Cadence? (she defeat a witch that was treating her town) Twilight? (Unlock the secrets of magic that not even the greatest wizard manage to do) Carelium? (Purify and reforme the embodiment of NIGHTMARES head own, while fighting for his own freedom) THAT is wings reward material
IT'S ALIVE!!!
I missed this story..
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And I hope you're feeling better, too
And the Prince gets a daughter.
Loving the new chapter. :D
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But when? I'm not telling
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…teaser, jejeje just kidding, great story so far, can't wait what will happen next.
Finger Cross for Nightmare start calling Mark 'Sensei, Sempai, Master, Teacher, or just…daddy'
Honestly not quite sure what I should feel about PTSD Badass Marine Mark and how easy it was for him to talk down Nightmare Moon. She seemed... small, you know? Diminished.
All she really got to do was to be in awe at his deeply-moving conflicts and be talked to death. She didn't even get to say what her greatest fear was. That's something I found very unfortunate; it could've been a powerful bonding moment, but it turned into a completely one-sided monologue. They didn't bond, she simply melted. And that, to me, lacked the emotional impact it could've had.
Compare it to the final confrontation between Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer in The Cutie Remark: That scene worked because both parties were active participants. We felt Starlight's struggle and pain because she was allowed to express it. She went through the stages of grief, she fought back, she shouted, she cried. We got to see it. Show versus tell. She wasn't so... passive.
Well, that's just my take on it. Doesn't have to account for much.