Ok…she is not pregnant, because she didn't show any sigh of heat, and I'm pretty sure there are rules of mares forbidden to work while in heat because of the pain it cause not to mention the alter of emotions, she didn't get pregnant 3 years ago because she say she was close on the heat, but not IN the heat, in other worlds PRE heat stated.

So…that leaves…that she is actually in love, and now…wow, she is fighting with herself because she is in love with Blueblood…but with REAL Blueblood!!!! oh god and this is clearly NOT that Blueblood so…she doesn't know if this is the one she fell in love or WILL fell in love.

Oh! the sex scene make much more, scene, Red Heart just wanted to remember her old flame, and now she doesn't know if the flame is still there?! holy crap this is serious

Huh, interesting.

I hope the real blueblood gets an attitude change, as his body trying tl sleep with everyone would be bad.

Twilight just stared as the prince got closer to her. By his reputation, she knew that he might have some bad intentions. Almost instantly, she prepared for the worse

could she not attack him if he should try something?, or has this something to do with him, just waking up?

I guess i understand that rape thing in this story right now, but because it wasn´t explained a chapter befor i think our reaction was still somehow normal.

I would suggest, that you make this story just for the new Blueblood, and make another one for the old Blueblood in the Human world.
You could take the same prologue, and should they still talk with each other somehow, then i guess you could just add it in both storys.

I don´t think it would interrupt much, but i feel like it would be better if the POV doesn´t change to much in this story. I don´t know if you even want to show Blueblood, but i guess so. I would read both, but i just felt like i would like it more like the way i suggested.

Good work, i won´t lie, the last chapter was good and weird at the same time, but if there is another good hapter like this one, i think i could think about to add this story to my favourites.

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So…that leaves…that she is actually in love, and now…wow, she is fighting with herself because she is in love with Blueblood…but with REAL Blueblood!!!! oh god and this is clearly NOT that Blueblood so…she doesn't know if this is the one she fell in love or WILL fell in love.

his is somehow interessting, i would say you are right, but at the same time you are not.
i think she liked Blueblood because he was nice, i don´t know if they are similar right now, but i guess the new Blueblood is more or less acting the way she wanted him to be.

Then again maybe she doesn´t know what to think about it, because he is clearly not himself, maybe she is affraid what could happen if he would remember everything.

Normally i am a bit wary about them having still the heat thing, because i think of them like the Humans of Equestria, and not just evolved horses/animals, and i normally don´t like to think that they are an easy catch for every Stallion that want to have sex, but till now it is a nice explanation for what happend in Redhearts past.

“Was it everything a dream?”

fix this

“At least, be polite and answer me before you even consider slapping me again.” The prince said in an annoyed tone

comma dose not go there. also rewrite this

“Whoever you are, I hope you are using MY body in the right way.” He said as he looked at his reflection, seeing not himself, but the monster so many ponies hated, including himself.

Knowing Blueblood, he's probably already got himself killed.

I don't get the rape thing in this chapter.

So, what? Talking somepony into having sex is considered rape? Or is it talking somepony who's close to heat that's considered rape?

From what I can see, Blueblood was an asshole, but they keep talking about him like he was Sombra or something. That doesn't really add up. He slept around. So? Was he married? Was it illegal? Did he lie to Redheart here? From what we can see, actually no. He flattered her and she believed he loved her, but she didn't say "He promised to be my special somepony" but "I thought he could be my special somepony".

What am I missing here?
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Like I noted, I don't understand the rape thing at all. And honestly, I keep thinking that if Luna or Celestia or even Twilight acted the way Blueblood acted, they'd get a pass by everypony.
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It would be interesting indeed if Redheart felt unsure about her love for Blueblood since this obviously isn't the Blueblood she fell in love with. However, I don't think things are going to be so nuanced.

Look at how everypony treats old!Blueblood like the third coming of Nightmare Moon. I don't at all get why they're all convinced he's this horrible monster, but we're obviously meant to believe it too. I expect things to build up to a very simple contrast:

Real!Blueblood=bad, Fake!Blueblood=good.

But maybe I'm wrong. It could actually become less of a cut and dried issue as things go on. Maybe there's a servant of his who at some point notes how quickly they all jump to rape allegations when that's not really what happened. I would be very, very surprised if Celestia sent Twilight to make some friends when she was a shut-in, sent Sunset Shimmer away when she became too power hungry, and banished her sister when she tried to overthrow her, but also idly sat by as her nephew turned into a rapist monster. Sounds like a bit of a stretch.

5712452 to be honest i think he maybe should change the rape issue into something else that works better in the story, i would like it more if he would be just the asshole, that just tried to utilize the mares.

There are to many things that are weird about the rape thing, even if i think i can understand it a bit better now.

Like I noted, I don't understand the rape thing at all. And honestly, I keep thinking that if Luna or Celestia or even Twilight acted the way Blueblood acted, they'd get a pass by everypony.

i guess your right.

5712164 I agree he's probable dead, again.

Now this story is getting good. And now that I know it's anthro it make more sense.
the struggle of Read Heart is a really nice and I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Good luck

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Hmmm you know, its curious how nobody is pointing out the 'amnesia' subject, I mean at this point Red Heart must be believing that he really has amnesia, so…why she didn't yell at Twilight 'HE HAS AMNESIA!!!' and then tell her that this is their chance for them to had a new chance have a NEW Blueblood and she is just trying to bring back the OLD Blueblood I mean…I will made sense don't you think?

5713001 i guess your right, i maybe didn´t said that, but there was a moment where i thought it was weird, that Twilight ignored everything they learned about his accident, (amnesia) and she seems to think he is just acting like that.

Somehow i think he would not have to act like anyone else to get what he wants.

I guess there would be something you could say against our theory, but it was a bit weird that Redheart was still that shocked, even if she knew she could just say that he didn´t do anything to her, at least to try to defend Blueblood in a way. I understand she is somehow affraid if the princesses are angry, but she could easily say something to defend him i think.

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Yeah you are right, I mean Twilight slap him for not good reason TWICE and she just let them be mean to him? that was a bit cold for her part, scare or not

I fucking swear to god if BlueBlood is ruining his life on Earth, I'll be pissed. -_-.

for love in all the holy don't make entire chapter about blue blood just small bits and and pieces if you can please

please I beg you let this just be an entire chapter about mark being Blueblood and not the real Blueblood because and knowing the real Blueblood his story might not be great due to his bitching nature

the adventure time memes are real

Crap, does this mean we switch to Blue Balls?
Can't we stay like this? I like Mark. He a cool guy.
He make all the right decisions.
BB only going to get shot. Thrown in jail.
Made into... Nappa you got this?
Nappa: A prison bitch.
Thanks. Then he stuck in Oz as the Prince Douchebag....
Huh... the hate is strong with this one. Sorry...

“What the!?” He got up again, only to find both princesses on the floor. “Oh, not again.”

You're still hitting the same assertion failure! This isn't Windows, turning it off and on again doesn't help. :D