"The course of true love never did run smooth."
Caramel, Braeburn, and the Elements of Harmony had long abandoned any hope of finding love in their lives. Granted, a few had their dreams of a certain somepony, but that's all they were to them: dreams. That is until Winter Wrap-Up, where Caramel's clumsiness sets off a chain of events that could lead either to the betterment of everypony or to a schism between the Elements. Visions, reappearances, secrets, and histories attack ten ponies who begin to feel love's gentle warmth. Before all is told, each will have to battle his or her demons to find love waiting on the other side.
Chapters (11)
Good stuff!
And Rarity is perfect for EQUINT ;)
554360 EQUINT????
Edit: OH! Equestrian Intelligence... i just call it the EIA
I'm here for that whole EIA stuff, not the shipping.
555615 lol why not? u dont like my shipping?
555625 Before I get started, this was going to be an edit for my previous comment, but you replied before I could post it:
"Haha, I tried reading this, I truly did, but... that Fluttershipping. It puts an uneasy feeling in my gut. I put it in my favorites, regardless but for some reason it's not showing up there. Perhaps it will later on."
I don't know, I can't see Flutters being straight. Someone once asked me why and my reply was: "Because a guy could hurt her so much more easily." She's so sensitive and really needs someone who can truly understand everything about her in my mind. But, that's just me with my weird quirks. Good luck on finishing this story, by the way. I'm sure there are a lot of readers who love where it's going.
555655 idk... i'd say Rainbow could hurt her a lot easier than Caramel could, you know? both physically AND emotionally, Dash is a hell of a lot tougher. I picked Caramel because (in my mind) he is as gentle as Big Mac, but without the ridiculous muscles.
555668 Yeah, the thing about Dash in my mind that would hurt Flutters the most is that the two have been best friends since they were both fillies, and having a friend like that betray your trust really kills you. And generally, I do like the ships I support to make sense (yes I know I love Flutterfire, we all have weaknesses lol) so good luck on getting me to follow something like Fluttermac.
555766 well let's put it this way... if caramel and fluttershy were fighting, i'd have all my money on fluttershy. reason one: the stare. reason 2: caramel wouldn't hurt an ant. reason three: caramel's worst fear is hurting fluttershy (if you read).
555785 Psssh! Yeah, yeah lol. Life would be pretty boring if we all thought the same way, huh? I know it's an overused phrase, but it has quite a bit of truth behind it.
556267 well, I know I can't MAKE you like my Fluttershipping, but hopefully you can at least enjoy the TwiBurn, StableHeart (you'll find out), PieJack, and other ships... there are 5 total ships in this story, not counting the ones in flashbacks... i'm bucking insane
I haven't read a single word, and i already like it. I kinda have an ability to judge a book by its cover and be right if i like it or not. I'll be back when i actually read the chapter :3
558724 haha, enjoy!
Hmm. I shall have to read it later, I'm in the middle of writing a chapter for my own stories.
558744 no sweat, that happens to me often.
Finished this chapter. All i have to say is this. It didn't reach my expectations. You, sir, Surpassed it. Excellent grammar, and (i am sorry for anypony who loves RD and AJ) but having them as unsympathetic characters were a wonderful bonus. i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff117/depogrl/Applause-2.gif
558766 i got scared shitless at that part where you said it didn't meet standards.
but then i read the rest, laughed my ass off, took an arrow to the knee, and STILL BECAME A BUCKING ADVENTURER!
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Lol, i'm sorry, I'm a bit of a morbid sadist like that sometimes. >w<
it was wonderful though :3
558779
thanks
D'AWW! my heart hnnnnnnngged. A bit quick, i might add, but well done :3
ii give you my seal of approval.
>w<
^that is my seal of approval
Wait, wasn't this posted before? I swear I was already tracking this.
You know, your writing style seems to match mine, though i think yours is better executed. Do you mind editing my story? called Story of Trixie's Redemption. if you ever have time...but this is one of my favorite stories, and i'm pretty picky over what i consider my favorite :3
=w=
aren't I already tracking this
558804
558816 perhaps... yes, i moved accounts, but kept the same name... it's complicated
558848 nope, story was moved to this account and reposted.... welcome back though
...im kinda dumb for not making a blog post first
558850
Ah, well then. Tracked again. Carry on.
558856 fair enough, new track incoming
I see what you did there with 'what would appear to be surprise'.
558868>>558902 sorry, guys
. make sure to alert anypony you know who is tracking the story... or just in general
558914 nothing to see here
It's totally not a wing boner, that's for sure.... (nervous chuckle)558940
Me Gusta ^w^
Silly question here: but why are the EMERGENCY medical services not available for a VERY exhausting event such as Winter Wrap Up? With something so physically demanding, injuries are bound to multiply during that day, so closing the hospital would be not only counterproductive, but downright suicidal.
559146 anypony with a truly SERIOUS injury would be flown to Canterlot on the double
but, at least you're realizing my horrible attempts at plot-hole patching
Aww poor Caremel </3
559666 you have no clue how real shit is going to get for Caramel
I can't wait
EEEEEPIIIIIC
560043 thank you
Yep, back on track.
loving this so far
561647 awesome
563158 thank you
My spidey senses are acting up. I sense something bad is coming.
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still very good tho
keep it up boyo
563303 oh you have no idea
563326 your brain is about to be more fuck... go watch "Read it and Weep"... see if you can spot something that might relate to the next chapter
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perhaps i shall good sir
564112
A special pony you will spot
Who lectures Rainbow quite a lot
About her damaged wing and bone.
Who he resembles is his own.
I LOVE poetry clues, don't you?
564170 ...oh you fkin tease.
hmmmmmmmmmmm
564184 oh and no posting spoilers if you figure it out
564210 thats going to drive me mad. i hate you so much XD
564210 wait. Is Mel going to....?
evil thing?