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stanku


A pony from a machine.

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Well now, that is a very interesting concept.... But there is a mistake. There is a way to kill the Nightmare, tho it seems they didn't think about it. Twilight was very close to the idea, but then took a wrong turn too many times along the path.

5617613 I think I should know this one, but nonetheless the answer eludes me.

5618022 Well in this story they said the Nightmare isn't a thing, or a person. It's more of a concept, right? To kill something like that, you remove all traces of it. Both physically and mentally. It already is 'physically' gone, all that is left is mental. By that, is to remove all memory of it, all traces of it, make the world forget it. Then it would even exist, because no one has a name for it, won't even know it's there.

5618038 How about the unconscious?

5618591 Wipe even from that. Clean out all traces of it that it no longer exists. That's the ultimate way to kill something. Where even history forgets it.

so twilight has exiled herself to the dreamscape ? is luna going to, once more, take the nightmare into herself...to save twilight ? is twilight fighting her other half in an endless game, like castor and pollix ?

6005370 No, yes, and no.

Oh, I like these dark stories that develop closed cycles. Nightmare Star and the split were very good ideas.
Nicely done.

A turn of rapid breath, a flash on the edge of vision, a snapping branch in the dark of night. It was all those things and more: it was their essence.

Best quote. I'll have to remember that one.

6405336 Yay, quotable material achieved!

6405349 Heh ;)
I'll use it with the proper citation then: Stanku, A Grey Twilight. FimFiction.net 2015 [accessed 08.09.2015].
Comments count as peer reviews.
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And I should go sleep now.

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