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cuteycindyhoney


My love of MLP has been invaded by my love of futanari! Be warned. As with many of my stories, it features a character suddenly growing a penis. In my stories, futa do not always take NO for an answer

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Pretty good, dood. I'm still salty over Twilight getting dicked by Celestia at the end of the other fic, but... so far so good, dood.

I'm afraid that's just a case of personal preference. I loved the idea of Celestia getting Twilight!
(That's why I wrote it!)

5601528 I'm almost tempted to beg and whine to have a follow up about getting a turnabout... but I'm not that petty... yet, dood. But I'll imply it super hard.

I have been giving it some thought. I sort of like the idea of Twilight mounting Sunbutt!

5601550 Excellent! I'd write it myself but I wouldn't want to even try to aspire to be your equal in writing and I have so many other things to do and I'm not doing them because I'm made it my life's goal to make everyone yearn for Twilight as a Dickmare in a passive-possibly aggressive sort of way, dood.

I could probably do that last thing more if I just kept on writing and not try to talk/beg other authors to do it for me, dood.

5601559 Amen, brother! I love dominant futa-twilight! i have to be honest, that last chapter really messed this up for me. not sure if i'll keep up on it, especially if she winds up getting pregnant. that's just one f those things i can't get over.

5601662 I've read ALOT of Cindy's stuff and I REALLY should have seen it coming, dood. Oh well, she wrote it... all we can do is comment on it for no reason other than to say 'I didn't completely agree with this, dood' and move on with our lives.

Just a question. Why are you guys commenting on my other story, and not the one on this page? That seems a bit rude to me.

5601763 Oh, apologies, dood. I really don't know, guess that last chapter rubbed me weird.

Back to point, it's good to finally see what happens to Scootaloo considering she's been transforming for so long... and quite surprised how welcoming to the prospect Applebloom is to it all... but I can't help but notice that almost everyone that is roughly around the age of the latest dickgirl do not want to be impregnated, while only one or two don't mind or would love to have it happen, dood. Just a thought.

Looks like those fillies are on, err, in quite the pickle!

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I did explain that in a filly's very first heat, she is not quite in control of herself. That's why Cheerilee is such a proponent of masturbation as a way of keeping oneself under control. Applebloom rationalized that since Scoot isn't a colt, that somehow made things a bit safer.
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Okay, I will add this. I don't normally do it, but here's an impromptu poll. How may would like to see Twilight discover that she did not become pregnant, and get almost "Lesson Zero" in her anxiety over NOT providing Celestia with a foal. This could very well lead her into thinking perhaps it would be for the best if she was to give one to Celestia so her princess would not be disappointed.

I could bring it near the level of chapter one and Twilight mounting Rainbow, but that could be dangerous in other ways. I have to try and please the most fans! To be honest, I think my writing is at it's best when the mare doesn't quite want what Twilight is trying to give her.

Woohoo.
Unexpected and very welcome notice in my feed.
Loved nearly all of your work so far, and this is no exception.
:-)

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I say go for it. Twilight is definitely Alpha material, especially with the way you write hir. It seemed kinda anticlimactic when you had Celestia try to knock her up instead of the other way around, at least in my opinion. My vote is yes on the chapter with Twilight knocking Celestia up.

Oh lody sweeties so naive she walked in right as they finished cleaning.

This is really good. So good even. 10/10

Don't give up, Apple Bloom, it's never too late! :trollestia:

Finally! That was hot. Wonder how Sweebles is going to get caught.

I know Spoon and Tiara are on the list, but what about Babs? Will Big Mac and Cheerilee get involved somehow, since they've been mentioned extensively?

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I don't know about Babs, but I have an inkling of an idea for Cheerilee. After all, Scoot is gonna get kinda horny now that she's got started! (Not as crazy lust driven as Twilight, but Scoot will have, uh, NEEDS!) Think about how many students get a crush on their teacher! I have more positive plans for Diamond Tiara. It's about time for that filly to learn a lesson! I worked quite a bit on part two over the last couple of days. I'm very happy with how Sweetie Belle's story is shaping up!

Rarity is going to an orgy isn't she?

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Pretty much. Pregnant unwed mare at an orgy!

In short, it wasn't nearly as interesting as the previous part, I have to say...

Longer version :
A ''chapter about reading someone's story in a journal'' isn't nearly as interesting as reading about things happening/that happened to the subject of the story. If this part had been shorter, and displayed more as an ''intermission'' rather than a continuation of the main story, then it might have been more justified. Indirect side-story VS main story.

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I actually thought chapter two was the better chapter. Maybe it's just me, but the idea of Sweetie Belle USING Rarity's words to clop is very exciting. It's slipping very close to pony incest. I really loved writing of Rarity's Glory-hole adventure! Have no fears though. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle will get something straight between them in chapter three!

I loved it all it was a awesome read i can't wait to see what happens next.

i loved this chaper it was a awesome read .I can't wait to see what happens next to and between them all next.I hope Babs comes to viset and joins in.

Well... Clop is still A+, Writing is still B-.

Something I noticed in this one is that your pacing was all off. You had too many "high points" during the clop section, even though each one was good on its own. One of the fetishes(Cream Pie) wasn't to my liking, but it was objectively fine. Also, the "flashbacks" before the first climax were a bit distracting, dragging it out a little, but nothing too bad.

As a side note(purely subjective), I also find the "unwanted but totally expected pregnancy" fetish a bit distracting. Even if it isn't rape at all, it seems to detract from the...intimacy, I guess?

And on another sidenote entirely: has Equestria never heard of bucking birth control?

Re: Celestia on Twilight: It is a futa-pairing of mine, but I generally don't like to mix it up with futa-Twi. It just felt off, as the others said.
Re: Twilight on Celestia: This is just muddling things up further with the above pair. I guess I'm just not a fan of FutaxFuta.
Re: Futaloo on Diamond/Silver: Totally! Bring on the schadenfreude!
Re: Futaloo on Babs Seed: Why not? It writes itself if the CMC are involved at all...
Re: Futaloo on Cheerilee: ...Nah, I'll skip that chapter. First, Cheerilee is evidently _already in a relationship,_ and I doubt Big Mac would appreciate being cuckolded. It just feels wrong, especially when there isn't a convenient excuse like you had with Cadance. This is a story about the foals, and this ship is in very different territory.

Please continue this and your other story.

5660444 when is this going to be updated again?

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I really should get back to this. Right now I'm working on a pony story not canon to this universe. It's actually part five of my "Dickgirls of Faeruhn" series. (Up to now, completely pony free!) Google that title, with the quotes, if you're curious. It takes place not long after Rainbow Rocks, and sees Twilight find a different Starswirl mirror. She won't exactly like the world it takes her to! When I'm finished, unless my muse commands otherwise, I might get back to our favorite blank flanks!

PS

"Dickgirls of Faeruhn" was not created by me. The author, Lightswitch, kindly gave me permission a couple years ago to write in the universe. It has been a pleasure to add to the wonderful stories he wrote.

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Considering they can only get pregnant once a year, the general technology shown (as random as it is) and the whole "love and tolerate" theme probably makes the general idea of birth control (pills anyway) contraversal at best.

So quite possibly no they may not have heard of birth control.

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Birth control is a natural thing to arise in any society. They've had it for centuries, if not longer(but for a long time it was considered more impractical than morally reprehensible, unless you were a prostitute or rich) so why not?

Getting pregnant once a year, sure, but it's a time of heightened arousal. If there's any time a pony would be wanting to get jiggy with it, it would be during heat-season. Which is kind of the point of most estrus related fics.

That, and impregnation fetishes.

"Love and tolerate." Really? You know that's not actually one of the themes, right? It's all about friendship and what's required to keep friendship healthy, but I digress.

As for tech level, they have helicopters, trains, hydroelectric dams, skyscrapers, and so many other things that were invented after condoms and chemical contraception. On top of that, MAGIC! A contraception spell would make perfect sense in Equestria, especially if estrus is used as part of the background.

Really the only thing stopping birth control is...the author. The author can set up any stumbling block they want in the name of getting ponies preggers. In the case of this fic's originator, it was only ever brought up once, and then was used as some...weird...balloon fetish. Yeah, the Rarity chapter was freaky.

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I loved having Pinkie Pie as the inventor of the condom. It somehow seems to fit her character. It is true though, the lack of birth control in my version of Equestria is simply so I can have all the mares get pregnant even if they don't quite want to. I love writing about futanari impregnation!

>Sequel to a still-incomplete story

How does that work? Is it actually a side story, or are you skipping ahead to sometime after the still-planned ending? And how does Of Mares and Donuts fit in?

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Perhaps "Side Story" is the better term. As soon as I figure out how, I plan on changing that. The edit function doesn't seem to lead me to that section of the home page though.

"Of Mares and Donuts" is a side story of chapter 12 of my mane story (see what I did there?) "My Little Pony: It's Good to be The Princess". I liked the idea of Joe and Gold Digger "getting off" on watching Twilight and Derpy.

"Magical Mathematical Symptomatical" is a stand alone though, and has no links to any of my other works.

Comment posted by cuteycindyhoney deleted Feb 26th, 2016

It looks like calling it a sequel is a site function when you link stories together. It is a side story though.

Oh, and by the way, I have been writing furiously for a couple of days. Sweetie Belle is in serious danger of a big belly, since she's positive that Scootaloo can control herself after her time with Applebloom. Will Applebloom's devious distractions make Scootaloo lose that control? Will a horny Sweetie Belle even care until it's too late?

Yes, the dormant story is getting an update...SOON!

EDIT TIME!

Chapter three has been added!

“She’s speakin’ Fancy!”

I can't say much about the rest of the chapter but. This fucking killed me.

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I just HAD to throw that in!
LOL!

I was just thinking about this when I saw the update. Awesome.

I so wish I could draw. I want a picture of what I imagined while writing the climactic scene!

Oooh! More! Many thanks!

:scootangel::unsuresweetie::applecry:That was pure awesome.

D'aww! Cutie Mark Crusaders herd! YAAAY!!!:rainbowlaugh:

Is it bad that I could not stop laughing after i finished this chapter??

Applebloom gave a frightened squeal. “Cutie Marks!” She felt her heart skip a beat. “Please not now! Please not for this! I don't wanna Cutie Mark that says I do sex stuff!” She closed her eyes tight. “Scoot, ya got ta tell me! I never thought I'd say it, but please tell me I'm still a blank flank!”

Twisting around a little, Scootaloo managed to check Applebloom out, without withdrawing from her nice warm snugness. “Nope,

:scootangel:  “you totally got your mark!  It's some kind of... big, metal box thing with an open lid, and there's a stallion's thingie that's shooting loads of his white stuff into the...  the...  dumpster!  That's what it is!  What do you think it means?”

:applecry:  *sigh* “There goes mah life as an engineer, potion-maker, or apple farmer. Heck, Ah'd have taken ‘Pest-Pony’ over this.”

Great story. When is the next chapter coming out?

Dunno why so many futa Scootaloo stories are coming out recently. :trixieshiftleft:
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But I'm definitely not bored of them yet! :rainbowkiss:
This is amazing.

What the heck is your problem Cindy were you stoned when you wrote this?!?

What the hell were you smoking to get so stoned you were not in your right mind when you wrote this story?!?

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